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Scarlet Sunsets

Influenced by scarlet sunsets, soul places on silence its bets, as bliss magnetism pervades form, vaporising fears and regrets. Divine currents, both cool and warm, cajoles us with love to conform, by relinquishing lower mind, plunging headlong in the bliss storm. Exiting thus, ego spawned bind, scent of bliss leads us, though we're blind, that employing mind of our heart, we're touched by God, loving and kind. As we are, if we choose to start, adding hues of rainbow to cart, rapture unbound in heart is found, promising never to depart. Treading softly on holy ground, heart at peace, as we're twirled around, dark fate has on us no control, since bliss beats within us resound. Influenced by scarlet sunsets, before death, we repay our debts, leaving behind no residue, love, light and wisdom, our assets.

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/2/2023 8:29:00 AM

“Adding hues of rainbow to cart” that line stood out for me! Brilliant write. I always find this form interesting but never really tried it. You seem so good with these forms and depth of your poems are always soul hitting! Loved this

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/2/2023 8:35:00 AM

Thank you, IE

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/2/2023 1:05:00 AM

You outdid yourself with this perfectly rhymed poem. Would we all meditate of what the Creator gave us to love and care.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/2/2023 1:23:00 AM

Thank you, Victor

Karen Jones

Date: 10/1/2023 9:26:00 PM

Uniquely rhymed and quite intelligent word choices. Bravo.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/1/2023 10:25:00 PM

Thank you, Karen :)

Lin Lane

Date: 10/1/2023 9:12:00 PM

Those are the only assets we can take with us. Material things are useless and far too many people value them above all else. Bliss count at four. Set a new record? ;-)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/1/2023 9:25:00 PM

Hahaha! Bliss, yes. When it becomes a permanent embodiment of being, we cannot help but applaud its unending delightful seduction

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/1/2023 9:07:00 PM

Treading softly on holy ground, when we do, everything becomes Sacred even a lovely scarlet sunset as you so eloquently put it :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/1/2023 9:11:00 PM

Thank you, dear Mystic Rose