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Scarlet

**** Would like to preface my return, and many apologies to fellow poets who may have missed my absence. Though I did not have much luck in love this past year, this poem was written years ago; I think it is a fine poem though sad, which some may know my attempts at sweet-sorrow have well pleased many. The poem not only reflects tragic romance, but spiritual matters; the instructive distinction that its the soul or heart who remembers things of love, rather than the mind; I think of my passed loved ones in my view with my heart felt memories rather than a mental memory, for example. I find the 'idea' or notion poetically at least interesting and pertinent to romanticism, which is the poem's theme.*** How honeyed her perfume pastille imbued many a god from their tower Shook all the gloom which lonely men feel she some mistress of darling power; teems she the night with sweet mist desires she all the allure of nymphs She has strolled my garden many a time forgotten I, the devil's music playing in the hills and the sad forsaken tresses --- weeping as a child; or the dying swan and all her lamenting trills; how many faces of God to touches of love how many more gods, though there need be but One? How femme she-so-fatale and not enduring with soft, she pecks my cheek and all the universe her eyes --- so sweet her kiss as worlds fade in yearning to cinnamon lips, she of eyes wandering and wild; twas her soul I wished to hold with curves, lingering delicate and never cold Death shall take her to the lonely-wood.... from me shall fade the petal most crimson about the night no more a-roving I could nor velvet embraces with she my love; the temporal love shall fall to heather the winds blow, and the tempest's trumpet roars about her whisper; but in the deepest dark I roved the delve; twas my soul which remembered (Scarlet)

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Date: 11/21/2019 4:02:00 PM
So exquisite in it's phrasing Keith, you have been missed, no one writes Romanticism like you welcome back, look forward to more beautiful writes sadness and all!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 11/23/2019 2:48:00 PM
Many thanks for the honourable comments John, glad you enjoyed some sweet sadness;-)
Date: 11/17/2019 12:34:00 PM
This is an exquisite look into love that lies beyond the physical. It is deep and penetrates the heart! : ) xxoo
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 11/23/2019 2:45:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed Connie!
Date: 11/17/2019 10:08:00 AM
this is hauntingly sweet like heathcliff on the moors, missing his love. Had a classy almost Shakespeare feel to it!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 11/23/2019 2:44:00 PM
Many thanks Andrea!
Date: 11/14/2019 1:07:00 PM
Oh my ..somehow this poem misted my eyes..To lose someone we love so deeply in life..Oh to see a weeping child at the loss of a dying swan..The metaphor of the swan so strong..She must have been somebody special..or could be there were more losses to follow..But to lose someone by Death..That loss is the greatest of them all.Only God can comfort us...if only He would.Deep and painful...Heartbreaking.A fave.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 11/14/2019 4:10:00 PM
Nice to hear from one of my favorite poetess' again, I like the ' lamenting swan' metaphor as well, the innocence of children like you said --- the allusion as well that in this case Scarlet is a kind thought to banish the melancholy of the 'devil's music and the sadness of her absence, though she was the cause. That the writer needed God, you are right --- whom she was now with, that she now she was remembered soulfully and not so much a physical matter, but a matter of the heart and how men and women adorably cherish each others company. Many thanks again for your pleasant visit Charmaine;-)
Date: 11/10/2019 2:50:00 PM
This poem is a gem from a gifted pen--every verse so unique--every emotion well conveyed--a splendid write, Keith.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 11/14/2019 4:00:00 PM
I am well pleased that you have honored my poem with your gracious comments Vijay. ;-)
Date: 11/4/2019 4:20:00 PM
Welcome back my friend! I have missed reading your wonderful poetry. This is in every sense a very fine and shining gem. It glitters as a treasure of reading delight.* A high glowing moon on a sad blackened night.* With its beauty a carousel of morose stark.* Such exists to marvel at in poetic dark.* A fav Bravo!!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 11/9/2019 9:02:00 AM
Many thanks Robert, I knew you'd like this piece, which I thought to be a good poem on sweet sorrow; it's not easy burying someone you once loved; but love is like energy --- it can't be destroyed.
Date: 11/3/2019 5:10:00 PM
First, let me welcome you back, Keith. You WERE missed. How hard it would be to love someone whose eyes were "wandering and wild." I do think I understand about the pain or joy of a relationship coming more from the heart or soul than the brain. Our brains just tell us to move forward, but our hearts make it hard to let go. Another beauty for my collection of favorite poems, Keith! Hugs, Carolyn
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/21/2019 11:51:00 AM
I think it was "Oliver" who said, "Please, Sir, some more..." Please let me know when you post a new poem, my friend. Hugs for you.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/4/2019 12:28:00 PM
Oh, I'm glad to hear that, Keith. Sorry you had to take a break, but many of us do that from time to time. I don't want to miss any of your new poems. Your work is a cut above... Hugs, Carolyn
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 11/3/2019 8:12:00 PM
So nice to hear from my dear poetess! I have healed enough to miss writing again, and to hear your kind words. I am going to try and post several poems over the next few weeks; and I am enjoying reading here again. ;-)
Date: 11/3/2019 11:49:00 AM
Welcome back my friend..your command of the English language has been missed....This is brilliant...I'm sure your luck in love will change.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 11/3/2019 8:04:00 PM
A great honor Silent, God is always with me. I often wondered why I never posted my Scarlet; she is perhaps a metaphor for all my lost loves, beginning with my mother who passed when I was only four years old. The poem may reflect also the fondness for fond memory; for the purpose of the piece would just be a sad song otherwise, I hope it is not...

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