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Scarf of Winter's Dawning

Laughter on a lilting wind Crush and crumple, sneeze and fall Do you hear the wild geese The trumpet sounds for summer Take the rake and pile them high These gifts of lingering light Born on breeze of apple crisp And smashed pumpkin premonitions Bury yourself in the core of autumn peek out like a nestling true Or ride the hay bales high a scratchin’ Underneath a howler’s moon Purple abalone face of night aglow Dew the jaded remnants of summer gone Wrap the joyful child of man Within the muffled scarf of winter’s dawning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/27/2010 8:41:00 AM
Hi. Made me want to wrap up for winter while thinking about the summer gone. Lovely piece. PS. Working on piece for your comp. Be lucky, Eamon
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Date: 9/15/2010 12:10:00 PM
This is a marvellous piece, and I would love t o have written it myself..reminds me of Dylan Thomas Many thanks for your suggestion about adding a line or two to my FRUITY VOICE..I am struggling with two lines at the moment...will add them as soon as they are satisfactory Best wishes Syd
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Date: 9/6/2010 11:19:00 AM
Something like Wlater de la Mere and Robert Frost in one, a very beautiful gift to the english language. Love it
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Date: 9/5/2010 8:27:00 PM
Outstanding! Soupmail
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Date: 9/2/2010 2:27:00 PM
Lovely! it has a nice flowing sensation ^.^
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Date: 9/1/2010 4:55:00 PM
Beautiful piece TEACH... but on this hot sunny beach in Maryland ..hard to think of cold or winter just yet.. but your poem is exquisite...great if we had a free verse contest about now so u could enter it..luv.. pupil..in luv..
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Date: 9/1/2010 4:49:00 PM
I love the imagery in this one, Debbie. I particularly like the line, "Purple abalone face of night aglow" The flow is nice and it makes me want to take a deep breath of fresh cool autumn air. Love you. Dane
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Date: 9/1/2010 2:35:00 PM
Oh, dear Deb, you make me think of moving away from S Cal. so I re-live the charm of the seasons passing. I love your poem immensely. Thank you for your nice comments on my poem. Love, iolanda
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:40:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Deb. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 8:09:00 AM
love it, beautiful imagery, much enjoyed
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Date: 9/1/2010 7:53:00 AM
Nice imagery, Deb, and I really enjoyed the comparison of wild geese cries to "The trumpet sounds for summer." Clever! Love, Carolyn
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