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Scared With Ms

Scared
with fear
not knowing
how I’ll feel
but I look so good, many people say.

They do not realize, the pain I hide
and how lucky
they should be
for their
health.

Copyright © Kelly Zakerski | Year Posted 2009

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 10/24/2009 5:22:00 AM Congratulations, Kelly, on placing in Brian’s “Twenty & Five” contest with this "KNOWING" poem. Excellent and TRUE! Lovingly, Dane Ann Login to Reply

Brandee Augustus Date: 10/11/2009 10:15:00 AM If this is a personal message, I love that at this stage in your life no one can tell whether your sick or not. That is a mark of a blessed attitude. There are so many people out there that are so needy for attention that somehow the whole world would find out that they broke a finger nail. It is such a small complaint compared to what goes on in people's everyday lives. People forget to be thankful for the little blessings in life. Congratulations on a well deserved win with your poem! Login to Reply

Adell Foster Date: 10/10/2009 10:21:00 PM Kelly this is a very poignant read from beginning to end. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest. God Bless, Always, Adell Login to Reply

Date: 10/9/2009 2:08:00 PM Your contest win gave me a chance to read this heartfelt poem again. Congratulations on your success. Enjoy your honor!!!! Keep on writing. Karen Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/9/2009 7:48:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Kelly. May you have many more. Love,Carol Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/9/2009 7:36:00 AM The emotion and sadness seeps through this poem. Well done! ~ Congratulations! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Robin L. Gass Date: 10/9/2009 6:14:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Brians' contest, Kelly! This is written with such clearity and your inner strengeth shines through your words. Excellent write! God bless you always, Love, Robin Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 10/9/2009 2:55:00 AM Dear Kelly, My prayers are with you. Congratulations on you well deserved win in Brian's contest. Much Love, Lainie Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 10/9/2009 2:47:00 AM Kelly, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 10/9/2009 1:02:00 AM Congrats on your success in my contest Kelly.Rgds Brian .my latest contest 'IMAGINE' is now open. Login to Reply

Date: 10/3/2009 8:45:00 AM Amen! Wonderful message in this poem. The emotion comes through your words. Good luck in the contest! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 10/3/2009 7:01:00 AM If we were to see the inner self in disease form, just maybe they will contribute more to the curing than killing with War >> nicely written once again Sara >> James Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/1/2009 4:44:00 AM Good health is one thing that we should give thanks everday because we never know the time when it will be gone. You have expressed the concept very well in this Tetractys. Keep writing. Sara Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 9/30/2009 11:41:00 PM Thank you for supporting my contest Kelly.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/30/2009 7:28:00 AM Indeed, the people cannot see this illness. That can be a blessing and a curse for one who is afflicted with MS. You would make a great spokeswoman for all who have to deal with the hardships of MS. Wonderful inspiration you provide! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply