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Scant Pulses of Soul Find Solitude

a sanguine set of sun descants the symphony of ocean's pulse within the confines of my soul i find serenity in the depths of its hold as my heart serenades in quickened strums beneath the rise of misted breaths within the serein of smoother skies as they break cloudless above the wake i feel the quake of tongued whispers as sand surrenders below the wave's firm caress hear the moans in climatic gusts as they thrush back through the lure of depths unknown searching for something more than this repetitive pressure against its shores my mind contours the same through the grains of time shattered in memories of fate where soul escapes briefly in salted stains across folds of ivory flesh unseen

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Date: 5/5/2020 11:39:00 PM
Congratulations for your win. "Beautiful" I love the water and I can feel the mist. Enjoy your day and win.......
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Date: 5/5/2020 10:44:00 PM
Happy Cinco de Mayo and sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Sandra - keep up the great work! I hope you are staying safe and sound, My Friend - blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 5/5/2020 12:00:00 PM
As always, beautiful pensive imagery and metaphor - so vivid! Congratulations on your first place win dear friend! Blessings and hugs.
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Date: 5/5/2020 8:37:00 AM
Sandy fecilitation You pride Your Poem on well articulated attire Penned
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Date: 5/5/2020 7:37:00 AM
Love the alliteration caught from the first lines! Congratulations, Sandra!
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Date: 8/21/2019 1:00:00 AM
"hear the moans in climatic gusts as they thrush back through the lure of depths unknown" - I still cannot get over how sensuous the beach and the ocean have become. I cannot get over this line!
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Date: 8/21/2019 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Caren....i love the beach, it's my happy place! it has many moods :) hugs
Date: 8/17/2019 6:08:00 PM
This was so soothing and beautiful, I had to fav; must reread again. Thanks for the tranquil moment.
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Date: 8/17/2019 8:36:00 PM
Thank you M.L your comment made my night. Hugs :)
Date: 8/17/2019 9:09:00 AM
"hear the moans in climatic gusts as they thrush back through the lure of depths unknown" - metaphoric delight!
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Date: 8/17/2019 8:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Caren :) hugs
Date: 8/16/2019 9:51:00 PM
A beautiful romance with the ocean, Sandra, in the freedom of the waves. I love it! : ) xxoo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/17/2019 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Connie...the ocean is my happy place, haven't gotten to see it yet this year... hugs :)
Date: 8/14/2019 12:47:00 PM
You have such a way with words! Wonderful!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/14/2019 7:20:00 PM
Thank you...nature always fuels my muse, well most times :)
Date: 8/14/2019 12:12:00 PM
Beautifully penned Sandra !
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/14/2019 7:21:00 PM
Thank you my friend :) hugs
Date: 8/14/2019 9:19:00 AM
Wonderful imagery as only you can do, always draws me in and always satisfies!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/14/2019 7:22:00 PM
Thank you John....glad my poems don't leave you stranded... in my younger days the endings were always the hardest part to fine tune.... hugs :)
Date: 8/14/2019 4:31:00 AM
- Emotionally written, Sandra - Excellent poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/14/2019 7:23:00 PM
Thank you my friend...apparently the emotions are running high lately, my muse has been ranting for a bit.... hugs :)
Date: 8/13/2019 4:16:00 PM
So evocative, Sandra, I can feel the pull of the tide on my ankles as I read this-
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/13/2019 6:07:00 PM
Thank you Michelle... the ocean seems to have a magnetic pull to it that draws us in :) hugs
Date: 8/13/2019 3:28:00 PM
Lovely penning Sandra, such great imagery and thoughtful insight!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/13/2019 6:06:00 PM
Thank you Gordon...some memories never fade and we can recall their every motion, breath, aroma.... hugs :)

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