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Says the Cricket to the Thunder

Hold me low, pin me under Says the cricket to the thunder In vibration intonation Sacred sonic open eyes Under fern and forest flurry Fits of fire feed the fury In the garden of the jury ~The cricket king defies Hear me deep, breath my name If you are Abel, I am Cane Seraphina serpentina Pounding Pagan ballerina Though I am always, never sever We are two as one forever To endeavor - ripple wind and skies ~The singing thunder thus replies

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Date: 2/10/2024 6:57:00 PM
This poem is a pure WOW for me, Mat. It's going right into my FAVES. Thank you, Gershon
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/11/2024 10:56:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time, my gratitude
Date: 2/9/2024 12:54:00 PM
Very beautiful. Your rhyme was impeccable.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/9/2024 5:48:00 PM
I appreciate your reply
Date: 2/8/2024 3:17:00 PM
an enchanting read, Mat. Loved 'pound pagan ballerina.' Fantastic imagery and smooth flow...have a great evening, Sara
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/8/2024 4:12:00 PM
thank you sara - a great evening to you as always
Date: 2/7/2024 11:12:00 PM
Only just opened my eyes, so everything hasn't sunk in but I very much enjoyed the word choices and rhythm :)
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/8/2024 9:26:00 AM
thank you so much

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