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Say Not the World Should Cease To Be

What if I gave you a necklace, Made full with one-thousand blooms? And gathered all of Nature’s fruits To give you the best perfumes? What if I built you a castle, With a waterfall next to a house? And plucked the finest petals round To weave you a flowery blouse? What if I found you two slippers, Encrusted with silvery gems? And told you I’d found them dripping From ten-thousand flower stems? What if I built you a seat, And made it all soft like a rose? And told you I stole from the sun In the sky something to make it glow? What if I gave you a kiss, And left it to rest on your cheek? And whispered lightly into your ear That I shall return next week? What if I gave you my vow, Wrapped round in beautiful rhyme? And promised that through all the wars, We’d love till the end of time? What if, my darling, I told you, Tomorrow the world will cease? And said I love you with all of my heart, Would this, alas, give you peace?

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Date: 8/5/2016 10:52:00 PM
Sweet!!
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Date: 7/31/2016 4:53:00 PM
Lovely, well written sentiments -- but, why is she not at peace? You don't say. If she doesn't love you back, then you deserve better. ;-)
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Date: 7/27/2016 10:11:00 PM
jaque ro, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Tom Arnone
Date: 7/31/2016 4:55:00 PM
You say that to all the guys (making a joke, Lin -- ha, ha).... ;-)
Date: 7/24/2016 10:35:00 PM
Jaque,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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