Unseeking Seeker Poet Rictameter

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Say It Like It Is

Divine
bliss magnetism 
bursts forth in bubbling joy,
teleporting consciousness thus
into unending spasms of ecstasy;
soma nectar dripping in heart
like waves of the ocean,
transforming soul
divine.

11-February-2022


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Connie Marcum Wong February 18, 2022 at 4:19 AM This is very, very beautiful my friend. Congratulations on your deserving Second place win. Blessings xxoo Unseeking Seeker February 18, 2022 at 5:15 PM Thank you Connie, so happy you enjoyed!

I Am Anaya February 17, 2022 at 1:30 PM Pure Nirvana effervescence. Congratulations Unseeking Seeker, Love Unseeking Seeker February 17, 2022 at 5:50 PM Thank you, dear Anaya!

Meghan Hutchings February 17, 2022 at 10:49 AM Congratulations! I could feel myself building up with suspense as I was reading your beautiful poem! Perfect choice of words! God bless...Meghan Unseeking Seeker February 17, 2022 at 5:49 PM So delighted these words resonate in your glowing heart, Meghan!

Valsa George February 16, 2022 at 8:25 PM This is an amazing write dear Seeker....! 'Bubbling joy, spasms of ecstasy, nectar dripping'.... all these we experience on reading your poem ! Happy my poem got rated along with yours. Unseeking Seeker February 16, 2022 at 9:12 PM Thank you, dear Valsa! :)

Michelle Faulkner February 16, 2022 at 8:17 PM This is so compelling and wondrous, especially the line 'bursts forth in bubbling joy' - congratulations on your win~ Unseeking Seeker February 16, 2022 at 9:11 PM Thank you, Michelle! So happy you enjoyed

Paulette Calasibetta February 16, 2022 at 7:57 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest. "Divine Bliss Magnetism"...stunning. :)Paulette Unseeking Seeker February 16, 2022 at 9:11 PM Thank you, Paulette!

Karen Croft February 16, 2022 at 12:37 PM congrats on your win. beautiful Unseeking Seeker February 16, 2022 at 6:00 PM Thank you, Karen!

Joe Maverick February 11, 2022 at 1:04 PM It's all happening in this flow of empathic Description, constrained by the chosen Form, I find it well worth the reading..' Unseeking Seeker February 11, 2022 at 6:52 PM First time I’ve tried this form, makes interesting geometry, like the double Nonet or Etheree