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Saving Lost Causes

No cause is lost, it's just not yet won Obsessed with persistence, can't be undone Some unlikely dreams succeed at the next turn Failure's my friend, that's how I learn A lost cause isn't simply a failing goal It's an issue that deeply touches your soul See its hidden potential, its prospect to be Breathe life into it, you'll set it free It's foolish to chase windmills, nowhere to go Ideas too flawed as far as you know My fervent desire is to back a lost cause One that gets passing attention, little applause A project of merit often ignored Count me in, I'm totally on board Know the difference between winning and losing Seems to the masses it's always confusing Let's treat those two "impostors" just the same As Kipling wrote in his famous "If" refrain Anyone can tag on to a sure thing Oh, what a beguiling song it can sing I used to think winning was everything Nothing compares to what a lost cause can bring

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Date: 11/26/2018 12:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "In response to IF ...." poems, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/26/2018 8:41:00 AM
Anne-Lise, your comment is most thoughtful, respected and appreciated. Thank you so much.
Date: 11/25/2018 6:45:00 PM
Nicely done, Greg, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/25/2018 7:36:00 PM
Eve, your notice is always most welcome and respected. Namaste.
Date: 11/25/2018 10:40:00 AM
Sadly we cant save every one Greg.. Great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/25/2018 7:35:00 PM
I really respect your judgment and your read of my verse. Congrats to the other entries. Don't know how you do it, run the contests, with all this fine work before you. Namaste.
Date: 7/27/2018 11:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Profound and thought-provoking. :)
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Greg Gaul
Date: 7/28/2018 7:48:00 PM
Thanks Susan for your kind remarks.
Date: 7/27/2018 6:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Greg Gaul
Date: 7/28/2018 7:47:00 PM
Appreciate your comment and insight Eve.
Date: 7/26/2018 8:54:00 AM
Great lesson, so many fear failure and fail to fail there way to success. Congrats on your win.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 7/26/2018 2:57:00 PM
You quite accurately focused on one of the key tidbits in my little verse. Failure: Pema Chodron, the Buddhist monk just published a book on failure lauding its importance in balance to our success bias. Thanks so much for your read.

Book: Shattered Sighs