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Saving Daylight

The guns and rocket launchers are being fed to the furnace, to be changed to hoes and rakes. Military training fields are being changed to playgrounds and amusement parks for kids; it doesn't matter the political party their parents belong. People are coming together to commemorate the fallen - rebels, government soldiers, innocent souls, and brave men and women who fought for peace. The Nation is chasing away the darkness in her past, creating a space for daylight in the future; a bright tomorrow for her sons and daughters.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/27/2015 10:28:00 PM
Teddy, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/28/2015 4:59:00 AM
THANK YOU Skat! ^_^
Date: 2/24/2015 5:39:00 PM
Bravo Teddy! Congrats on a truly meaningful write
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/25/2015 8:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Mark! :-)
Date: 2/23/2015 7:54:00 PM
Wonderful hopes and dreams. Congrad's Light & Love
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/25/2015 8:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Debbie! ^_^
Date: 2/22/2015 9:25:00 PM
Beautiful write, Teddy,congratulations on your win. Blessings
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/23/2015 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Eve! ^_^
Date: 2/22/2015 7:06:00 PM
I love your unique take on the theme - congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/23/2015 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Jan! ^_^
Date: 2/22/2015 6:09:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/23/2015 9:44:00 AM
Thank you for your applause and morale support Linda! ^_^
Date: 2/22/2015 5:19:00 PM
Teddy, this one caught me off guard on first reading causing me to reflect on so many dark days. Hopefully we can help to save that daylight. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/23/2015 9:46:00 AM
I am greatly honored to have participated and won in your wonderful contest John! Regards, Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/23/2015 9:43:00 AM
Thank you for your kind applause John! :-) I sure have faith that one day we will make this world a Heaven, as our conscience grows.
Date: 2/4/2015 12:37:00 AM
so very true... war has darkened our lovely earth and its time to bring in some light... nice pen... regards, nad!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/4/2015 2:15:00 AM
Thanks Nad! ^_^ Let's bring in some light! ^_^

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