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Saved By the Alarm

I dreamed that I lived in the sea, So happy, contented and free. No need to do dishes, I fed with the fishes 'Til a sea creature tried to eat me. won 5th place

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Skat A

Date: 3/11/2010 6:14:00 AM

Cute, I enjoyed th smile....

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2010 10:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2010 10:26:00 PM

great job with this one,Joyce Congratulations!

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/1/2010 8:55:00 PM

Wonderful Limeric, Joyce! My congratulations on your win in the contest! Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your always kind comments! Peace, love, Audrey

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/1/2010 11:17:00 AM

So glad you escaped or we woujld never have heard that clever Limerick. Well done Déirdre Ó Maidín

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/1/2010 5:51:00 AM

congrats on the win!!

James Fraser

Date: 3/1/2010 3:39:00 AM

Ha ha, kool Limerick Joyce, i am delighted for you being placed in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/1/2010 12:09:00 AM

It’s a fish eat fish world out there! Congratulations Joyce, you swam to the top of the pond with your winning placement in Carolyn Devonshire’s Sea Tale Limerick contest. (Imagine bubbles floating around the following words!) Bask in the fun of the winner’s circle. You deserve it. Big Smiles! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 2/28/2010 9:35:00 PM

There were a lot of witty entries in this contest and yours was one. A keeper. Congratulations to you, Miss Joyce on a solid entry. Regards, Gerard.