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SAVED

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Below is the poem entitled SAVED which was written by poet Ja Ja. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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SAVED

I stared out the window
My brain, completely disengaged
No thoughts, no emotions
But a war was being waged

I could not move or even think
Stood lifeless, as I gazed
But, inside my brain
This awful darkness blazed

Outside the window, light
It seemed so warm and pure
Still, inside my head
A madness did me lure

I could not raise my voice
Could not, say a word
That evil’s lock on me
Seemed to be assured

But then an angel’s voice
So sweetly to me said
Come with me my dear
And let us, go to bed
BOEMS BY JA 583       
FOR MY WIFE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 10/4/2017 6:19:00 AM
That really is a lovely poem JaJa....Maria
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