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Balanced on a hammock, I gaze up at the night sky remembering the Lord as His Sabbath nestles in the foremost regions of my anxious heart. And then, a chilled breeze, melted ice on my feet, followed by a warm glow of gratitude. Because, a spider was saved tonight, and it will—feebly— seek another warm place Soon. Written: January 4, 2020 Note: This is a snippet from my Dead Spiders Weave series. Volume VII: Peace in God's Embrace. I have been writing this series all of this year. I did not forget about my Light On the Devil's Chord series. I have the final section, and will post that very soon. Love always, Laura

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Date: 9/21/2020 6:12:00 AM
Nice
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Date: 9/20/2020 7:14:00 PM
Not one for spiders like your write l cud picture were tou qere nice thankyou for toyr kind words on mine davidscottxxx
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/20/2020 7:31:00 PM
Happy you enjoyed. Yes, spiders are not everyone's favorite. I appreciate your kind thoughts, David. ~Laura
Date: 9/20/2020 4:36:00 PM
The spider's sanctuary, a shimmer and a silky kiss upon the lips of Life's sublime suffering...I love the way you spur me Poetess. Your projects sound neat Laura. I've always loved your parabolic style...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/20/2020 7:30:00 PM
Thank you for the kind and warm words, Justin. I'm always on to the next project often before my mind can comprehend my drive. Thanks for being so supportive. Sending love. ~Laura
Date: 9/20/2020 11:35:00 AM
This snippet arouses my interest and is emotionally beautiful, Laura, especially in the spirit of gratitude. Your imagery is intriguing, moving and inspiring. Movement in warmth follows being stalled in the cold ("ice on my feet”.. frozen with fear?). Your expressive pen never fails to impress me, my friend. Warmest wishes always, dear poetess.. ~Susan
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/20/2020 7:29:00 PM
Hello Susan! I hope you are doing well. I want to check out your work soon. I havent been on PS for a long while. I appreciate your kind feedback. You are a perceptive reader. ~Laura
Date: 9/20/2020 10:35:00 AM
You are an amazing writer Laura, even with a small snipped, I fall into your words and can feel the emotions....
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/20/2020 7:28:00 PM
Thank you dear. I have a lot to catch up on. I've been meaning to catch up with my friends' work here on PS. Thank you always for the kind words. ~Laura

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