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life boat traversed stormy seas rescued crew at ease 2-LINE POEM - ziket Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier 08/13/20

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2020 3:49:00 PM

A great relief to see that crew at sea!! Congrats, sweet Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2020 3:52:00 PM

thanks Andrea the RLNI was founded on our little Island:-) hugs Jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/18/2020 2:00:00 PM

Back to say Congrats! Jan! Well done!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2020 3:47:00 PM

thanks Krish:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2020 12:43:00 PM

Congratulations for your win. A wonderful write and picture. We all need to be rescued from time to time. Enjoy your win and day.................

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2020 1:20:00 PM

Thanks Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/18/2020 10:36:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2020 1:20:00 PM

Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/18/2020 8:35:00 AM

Love the rhyme and message in this ziket, Jan. So much expressed in so few words. And congrats on your win in Line's contest. Rescue and Relief, Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2020 1:19:00 PM

Thanks GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/18/2020 7:44:00 AM

Excellent penning Jan. Congratulations for your win! xomo

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2020 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2020 6:07:00 PM

Excellent imagery, Jan. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2020 3:29:00 PM

thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/15/2020 2:08:00 AM

A nice tribute. Best wishes in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2020 11:50:00 AM

thanks Krish:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/14/2020 11:51:00 AM

Nicely done, but I would not want to be in their boat! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2020 2:56:00 PM

No nor me Rico!:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2020 10:55:00 AM

I love it when storm stories end well. Wish all of them could. Great job telling your story in just two rhyming lines, Jan! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2020 2:56:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn the RLNI was actually set up on our little Island:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/14/2020 6:30:00 AM

And how happy we’d be to see the lifeboat! The seas are beautiful and dangerous.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2020 2:51:00 PM

the RLNI was founded on our Island:-) hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/13/2020 5:38:00 PM

Good imagery, good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2020 2:50:00 PM

Thanks ML:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 8/13/2020 12:16:00 PM

a definite winner here

Jan Allison
Date: 8/14/2020 2:44:00 PM

Thanks so much jack , the RLNI was actually set up by Sir william Hillary after a ship wreck on the Isle of Man, its one charity we do support!:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/13/2020 8:34:00 AM

excellent! good luck in the contest, jan - you've nailed this one!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2020 8:36:00 AM

thanks Ilene:-) it was a great challenge:-) hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/13/2020 8:15:00 AM

Great contrast between 'stormy seas'/'at ease' - much is said in few words, good luck in the contest, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2020 8:21:00 AM

Thanks Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/13/2020 7:51:00 AM

A wonderful creation. Love to you and best wishes for a win

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2020 7:58:00 AM

Thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/13/2020 7:04:00 AM

Must be such a relief to see that orange RNLI boat when you're in difficulty, all manned by brave volunteers. Just sat at Combe Martin enjoying the view. Hope you're well Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2020 7:11:00 AM

Thanks Tom:-) Enjoy your break, all fine here:-) hugs Jan xx