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Save Me Not

living or dying time is bout to tell breathing now thriving heaven or hell times ticking dreams fading hearts weakening soul hesitating life has drained me the crawling, the climbing oh Lord save me my soul is hending is dawn breaking please awake me is this the ending please, dont, fortake me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/13/2016 11:58:00 PM
Jennifer Arnott, awesome poem, thanks for sharing. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/27/2013 2:45:00 AM
Nice piece of poetry.i loved it. Gidds
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Date: 4/22/2012 10:15:00 PM
The salvation is always offered and available.....we have to reach out and take it...accept it..
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:58:00 AM
life has drained me this line explains me i need to be revived lol 7up!!!
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Date: 8/8/2011 5:11:00 PM
great poem i am glad the LORD saved me. i loved this work.
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