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Saturn's Rings

Streaks of endless, treeless Zen landscape came From Sun's shadow dancing in the sky Like a child's "hide and seek" game In layered wind-swept grass so high The bursts of light did strew Through misty clouds of blue and gray Lingering rain drops fell askew A brilliant day in April. I a castaway Lost in the roaming free at last Rolling over and over, a victim Giant humid huffing breaths that blast up and down the hills of scented clover Intoxicated by the seasick motion Of this magic moment of energy and space Caught in the oneness of love and devotion I lay in this grassy place Gusts upon the green blades buzzing with synergy While morning sun rays placed its striped bee patterns Cast upon my face like some radiant Zebra energy From across the universal rings of Saturn

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Date: 5/2/2019 3:55:00 PM
Lonna, truly wonderful opening to this imaginary life on Saturn, I loved especially the line about the Zebra line shadows from the rings. Congratulations on your honorable mention finish!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/19/2019 11:13:00 PM
I truly appreciate you wonderful comments! Thanks so much.

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