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Saturn In the Telescope

SATURN IN THE TELESCOPE Creamy yellow disc and rings Satellites like tiny brothers Music of the spheres she brings To Titan, Rhea and the others. Moving slowly, orbit defined Her face obscures the stars behind What strikes me then is not the science But the blackness and the silence

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Date: 11/30/2010 8:55:00 AM
behind that blackness are stars you've never seen. millions of years in the making. yet is as a match lighting to God and going out. this is a universe an infinity. and the answer is in that blackness and the light of an unknown star. john
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Date: 11/21/2010 11:48:00 AM
Quite a vision of the ringed planet you have given us, Sydney. The last two lines are so profound. We see much movement when we look out into space, but the silence seems eerie. Best wishes, Carolyn
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