Saturday Surprise

Poll Parrot belonged to little Addie, and he always lingered by her side. People admired the well spoken companion, like the dusky skies, dyed. Poll Parrot could talk a blue streak, and seemed like one of the family. He greatly loved Addie's tea parties, when he ate toast and tea, gladly! He loved flying around his garrett room, with its ivied, bare windows; Where the sun set in pink magnificence, before emerald stars imposed. Friends were frequently charmed by Poll, among avian's best dressed! He was fun and fascination, like the post storm rainbows, unsuppressed. Rain's footsteps left freshwater puddles, along fragrant fields and roads, In springtimes of family visits. At pink moon dusk, of crickets and toads. Poll lived in the house of freedom, for he often flew away, only to return. Green plumed Poll was trained thusly, as aged, maroon stars, ever burn. Lemony clouds and succulent grass, seemed to beckon, on Poll's street; And sweet highs and lows, scattered silent moments, of summers fleet. Poll visited nests of new neighbors, in their backyard trees of sunshine; When saffron noon was noisy with chatter, midst veiling leaves of lime. It was a time of 'orange carpet' creeping, at dusk of plum, 'crepe myrtle', And 'blue globe' thistle rotated, as crowds danced to 'honeysong purple.' 'Spider cluster' chrysanthemums crawled, in a luscious, rainbow of colors; As 'wild berry' coneflowers ripened, in the scented smoke of late summer. Poll and Addie had tea one Saturday, when Poll saw a fallen apple, nearby; And flew out the window for a few bites. But, returning, gave a startled cry! Poll had an unwelcome visitor, who had eaten nearly all his toast and tea. Addie then rushed from the garrett room, to alert the rest of their family! A little brown mouse was visiting, his steps retraced, via another window; For Poll's outraged verbality alarmed him! He'd rather feel the wind blow! The mouse had entered by a window, next to a trellis, covered in pretty ivy. Father closed that window permanently, and Addie brought tea and berries. They seemed to enjoy that tea party more than any other they had before. Like red-gold sun sparkles after storm, when tawny blooms crowd the door! 'Little Poll Parrot Sat in his garret Eating toast and tea. A little brown mouse Jumped into the house And stole it all away.'
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Date: 8/9/2025 4:22:00 PM
So many titillating, invigorating, excitement making lines, such imagery is loveliness on a level of its own - on an Evelyn level where she resides as a word smith staple housing a stable of imagination to gift the world. Oh, girl, keep doing you, marvel us true. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/9/2025 9:25:00 PM
Dear CayCay, your kind, gracious words are so much appreciated. I'm so delighted that you enjoyed this. I will never stop writing. :) <3
Date: 8/6/2025 5:38:00 AM
Evelyn, your couplets were delightful to read. Your poetry is consistently stunning, with vivid imagery and a compelling narrative. You don't let an unwanted mouse into your residence and meddle with loved ones, especially when it's Tiny Poll Parrot.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/6/2025 9:17:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind expressions, Sotto. Your gracious remarks are cause for delight. Best wishes, my friend. :)
Date: 8/4/2025 10:00:00 PM
Ha. The nursery rhyme at the end is so cute
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/5/2025 9:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. At least they had a berry good time, despite the mouse's intrusion. :D
Date: 8/4/2025 2:03:00 AM
How can one not enjoy this poem? Poor Polly ended out without breakfast. A fun poem. Thanks for the laugh.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/4/2025 8:04:00 PM
I'm glad this poem made you laugh, Victor. Thanks so much for letting me know. Blessings and hugs.
Date: 8/3/2025 10:46:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Saturday Surprise" write/story. Pretty Bird Picture... Parrots can talk a lot. The house out back has 2 and they never stop. Love your ending. Have a wonderful day writing away..................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/3/2025 10:34:00 PM
I think parrots must be so fun to have as pets! I love birds. Thanks so much for your gracious remarks. Kindest regards. :)
Date: 8/3/2025 6:03:00 AM
This was such a fun and colorful read! I loved Poll Parrot’s personality and all the vivid little details—like the toast and tea, the ivy, and those beautiful skies. Felt like stepping into a sweet storybook. That ending rhyme was the cherry on top!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/3/2025 10:37:00 PM
Thank you very much it for your warm words of appreciation, Rowena.I'm so delighted that you enjoyed this! Best wishes. :)
Date: 8/3/2025 12:38:00 AM
Lots of stunningly colourful and vibrant lines here, Evelyn...really quite lovely. Enjoyed the read immensely! :) john
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/3/2025 10:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, John. Your words delight me! Best wishes. :)
Date: 8/1/2025 6:31:00 PM
Your Couplets were a delight to read, Evelyn. Your poems are always so well-written with lovely imagery and a story to boot. Little Poll Parrot was family, you don't let a stray mouse, come into the house, and mess with family. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/1/2025 6:51:00 PM
Nice to hear you were delighted, because that delights me. Thanks so much for your positive, uplifting comments. All good wishes, Evelyn :)
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