Satin Sheets a Grave Yard For a Million Dreams

Satin Sheets A grave yard for a million dreams Light of day, exposes what darkness of night, hides upon platinum, satin skies, above an emerald green sea, where- upon the waves of passion – you and I take rides, leaving behind – in a cloud – dream children from you and me. Children who – upon the light of dawn- dream no more, just die as they leave behind their essence, upon a satin platinum sky, as we drift in and out – splash about – side by side lie, before all comes to an end, you ready, my friend, say goodbye. I wonder what could have been ?, where their essence will go ? These unborn children, without dreams, dreams I will never know. As the dreams in my head begin to fade from view, I get out of bed, and lost, is all I thought I knew. B. J. “A” 2 July 17th 2003

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Richard Palmer

Date: 5/25/2014 7:59:00 PM

so true not only satin sheets,cotton too lol,but I think you miscalculated,its Zillions lol,,,great write love how you put this together Williams

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 5/26/2014 2:19:00 PM

Hello Richard Palmer : Thank you once again Richard, for stopping by, for “ great write love how you put this together Williams ” your glowing comment. Yes, “ sheets,cotton too lol ” how true !!!, along with grass, car seats -when cars had front and back seats big enough – and a thousand other delightful places . Maybe for a virile young man like yourself “ I think you miscalculated,its Zillions lol ”, but, as for an old man like I was then, and even more so now, a million would be an exaggeration . Bill . ( B. J. “A: 2 )