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July 6, 2023

Write a Story Poem by Joanna Daniel

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Sappy Tails Story Poem

Betsy, the sweet girl, was such a beauty Never slack on milk, she did her duty Pouring out her supply, like a fountain Feeding on the rye across the mountain She raised sweet, soft eyes to prove her gentle Always so much love wasn’t accidental With a soul, good and warm, she’s so friendly Yet, her master told her she’s too spindly Despite her hunger, she just wouldn’t gain weight She worried about things like a soul mate Her thoughts took her to the fall, and the hay When the Blue Ridge Mountains switch to deep gray Thoughts of gold bales left her stomach starving Though that hay could’ve made a wood carving So dry and stale, it couldn’t have been tasty Still, she sprinted to the stall, quite hasty After eating her fair share, farmer said “look at Betsy, she’s fat as that pig, Ned” At last the cow and the pig were happy Even though their tale is slightly sappy!
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Flood Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Congrats on your win, Regina. Can’t go wrong with pigs and cows… guaranteed to bring you ‘wows’. ;-)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day...................
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 1:35 AM
A fun poem designed to attract readers of all ages, Gina, congratulations:)
Wolf Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 9:53 PM
Happy trails to Betsy. Your cow has us wowed! ~ Roy Rogers and Dale Evans
Ray Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 3:54 PM
it was such a delight delving into your story...well done Regina...thank you for the delightful moments with Betsy
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 10:39 AM
- A lovely story, Gina - I have had a dog named: Betzy :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Messina Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 9:05 AM
And they lived happily ever after :) Nice write, Gina. BOL in the contest. Love & hugs Charlie
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 8:36 AM
I love it, Gina! Especially love the first verse! Hugs ~ Kim
Allison Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 6:42 AM
oh what a charming story Regina, its such fun and the imagery is delightful:-) hugs Jan xx
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