Sapphire Eyes Suffer

The opal anchor clings, clutching, falling,
fetching the lapis lazuli. Mermaids flee,

frightened by the heavy ornament. Fate,
like chain links of Jacob Marley; shaking

of the seabed at the pounding of sin.
Gavel striking like a velociraptor storm.

Sand churns as if Scrooge is turning
in his bedclothes, his premonitory bed.

Sapphire eyes suffer the crashing. Abode
of ponderous tales, predilection of sharp

shadows, darting hither and thither,
reserved for the most heinous of beasts.

“The beast is dead,” speaks Amphitrite
Her children carol, “Ashes, ashes…”

They dare not speak the scathing name
of molest and neglect, mutilated beyond

recognition. His fists forever incarcerated,
His face, food for the scavenger fish.

Mermaids remain innocent of such leers,
never drawing near to earthbound treachery.

The silk sense of security constantly tending
to their flesh. Tails fearlessly splashing.

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But if anyone causes one of these little ones who believe in Me to stumble, it would be better for him to have a large millstone hung around his neck and to be drowned in the depths of the sea.

Matthew 18:6 BSB
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Hind Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 6:21 PM
My gosh, you're an amazing and potent writer, I'm a real fan.... been away, but it's good to do some catching up tonight...very astounding work <3
Proxenos Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Mermaids- wish they were true and not only a fantasy or myth, - how beautifully you depict their innocence and how masterfully you blame man for sin and warn them as per your verse Mathew 18:6 BSB Your poem contains powerful alliterations and metaphors. An awesome write. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 6:23 AM
Thank you so much, Jennifer! Hugs
mysore Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 9:35 PM
'Mermaids remain innocent of such leers, never drawing near to earthbound treachery'- line that stabs us dear poet. amazing write. cheers.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 6:24 AM
Thank you, Thriveni!
Rodgers Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 11:04 AM
Dear Kim, What a haunting underwater tableau, blending mythological elements with raw emotion. I loved the mermaids' innocence against the weight of human sins because for me it created a powerful contrast. I also think your literary allusions add depth, while the sapphire eyes serve as a focal point for suffering. Beautiful in all Ways! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 1:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel! I appreciate you! God bless!
Anaya Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 10:42 AM
O a stone of wisdom, looked it up. Kim I love this fantasy, filled with metaphors and alliteration ! Kim this is a masterpiece - character references, mermaids and goddesses. Every line is perfection. Faving ~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Thank you so much! I appreciate your critique!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 10:28 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Many will be wearing a large millstone around his necks... Have a blessed autumn day writing away...............
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 10:59 AM
Sorry will last forever without freedom.
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