Santa's Fall

Santa hits his head on the wall,
It was a drastic chimney fall,
He was asleep on the floor,
His sleigh waited at the door,
The jingles were not loud a call.


December 20, 2022.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Miller Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 11:53 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Emate Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Terry. It's an honour. Many blessings and Merry Christmas.
Roper Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 7:17 PM
Congratulations on your win, Thompson. Many blessings and I wish you a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year
Emate Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 11:37 PM
Thank you, Eve. I'm honoured. Wishing you a fun-filled Christmas and a prosperous New Year.
Fowler Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 5:59 PM
Congratulations on your win Thompson! :)
Emate Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 11:34 PM
Thank you, Linda. I'm honoured.
Kitchin Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 3:58 PM
Thompson, a fun limerick, congratulations on your winning placement!
Emate Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 11:33 PM
Thank you, Tania. It's an honour.
Hargreaves Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 2:48 PM
Hi Thompson. Your poem brought back childhood memories of Santa. I imagined him trying to get down our chimney and probably getting stuck there or being injured. Thanks for sharing this with us. Best wishes for Christmas. Tony
Emate Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 3:57 PM
I'm glad the poem brought childhood memories. They take us away from the stress of the present day. Merry Christmas.
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