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Santa Jack

With Christmas time coming It's time to call Jack Sears needs a Santa to get the Families back They look for his number It's no where to be found They look in all the drawers Managers buzzing all around Then almost like magic Who walks through the door Sure enough it's Jack no need to search anymore His boots are all shiney His beard white as snow He looks like Santa's twin His eyes even glow Retail season is saved The people coming in today Will get to see Santa Jack And put gifts on Lay Away The children all love him They don't give him a break Poor Santa Jack has to go His knees start to shake He drops little Johny Jumps over some trees Slipping on a present He falls down on his knees The real Santa's watching Down in the North Pole A special gift for Santa Jack This year he won't get Coal Perhaps a red new suit with some non slip boots No more nasty stains When Santa Jack gets the toots For Carol Eastman's Christmas Contest. I think the kids will enjoy Santa Jack. Dedicated to my friend Jack, a jolly old soul who's never lived at the North Pole.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/14/2014 12:51:00 AM
A very humorous poem for the Christmas season, and also a heartfelt dedication... Great work, Rick. Congratulations on your win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/14/2014 7:08:00 PM
Hi Kelly, thanks for the kind visit and comment.
Date: 12/7/2014 11:19:00 AM
Loved ur write much Richard! It's so real n superb! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:41:00 PM
Not only the kids would enjoy Santa Jack even the old as well,I am also searching Jack's number here ,praying he appears miraculously as he did there... a great work ,congrats on the win Richard...huggs
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Date: 12/6/2014 9:07:00 PM
Great fun Richard. He really would make a great Santa and is such a jolly old soul. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/6/2014 1:58:00 PM
Well, I had to scroll way down, but I finally found Jack.. and a nice tribute it is to a fine fellow! Well done!
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Date: 12/6/2014 11:13:00 AM
Love this Richard am going to have to fav it, just because it is Santa Jack. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 12/6/2014 9:38:00 AM
lol...nice write...congrats on the win
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2014 9:42:00 AM
Thanks Joseph.
Date: 12/6/2014 8:43:00 AM
I think the kids will enjoy Santa Jack almost as much as the adults here at PS. Congratulations, Richard, a daring tale of an real live Santa
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2014 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Reason.
Date: 12/6/2014 8:22:00 AM
Like the running humor in the poem, congrats on the win
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2014 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram.
Date: 12/5/2014 7:32:00 PM
Richard, nice tribute to your friend, wonderful story. 7 and congratulations on a great win. Blessings and oxox eve
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2014 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 12/5/2014 6:01:00 PM
congratulations on your win. a fun story. Love, Joyce
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2014 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Joyce.
Date: 12/5/2014 4:55:00 PM
congratulations on your #1 win
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2014 7:28:00 AM
Thanks Robert.
Date: 12/5/2014 4:11:00 PM
Very cute children's Christmas tale, Richard. Even better that you wrote it in honor of your friend, the real Jack! Congrats on your win! Sandra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2014 7:29:00 AM
Jack is the perfect inspiration, the jolliest person I know.
Date: 12/5/2014 3:36:00 PM
ooh Santa Jack how could I have missed this classic - fabulous write for my dear brother:-) Many congrats:-)hugs jan xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/5/2014 6:45:00 PM
An A1 original for the best most humorous gentleman of them all! Santa Jack brings joy wherever he goes!
Date: 8/11/2014 6:59:00 PM
Cute! puts me in the mood for Christmas, only four more months to go!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2014 5:37:00 PM
Less than a month now.
Date: 11/27/2012 7:18:00 AM
I agree with you Jack would make a jolly Santa....wonderful write! Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/27/2012 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Cecilia
Date: 11/17/2012 9:13:00 AM
Very cute, Richard. He'll love it. Lovely.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/19/2012 7:37:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 11/17/2012 6:53:00 AM
Ahh Santa! I have 2 about Santa the better of them is called Buba Claus ;) Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/17/2012 7:03:00 AM
I will try and find it.
Date: 11/17/2012 5:21:00 AM
In our little community, they have been trying for years to get me to be their Santa for the Children's Christmas Party... maybe this year I will after reading your charming Santa Jack poem! LOL Ho ho ho!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/17/2012 7:02:00 AM
I could not resist my friend. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/16/2012 10:56:00 PM
"put gifts on Lay Away" very funny. Thank you for putting a smile on my face this evening. What an enjoyable read.
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Date: 11/16/2012 6:24:00 PM
aww you saved nothing? [peer] Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/16/2012 6:32:00 PM
try again I was in the middle of writing it.

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