Santa Clause

On Cristmas Eve, comes Santa Clause,
stuffing tons of cookies in his jaws.
It's no wonder he's Jolly and fat;
I would be too, if I ate like that.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 5:31 PM
Nice flow, good job again!
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 10:54 PM
Arlene, Congratulations on your "Christmas Character Clerihew" :) LINDA
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 9:46 PM
Congratulations on your win, Arlene, Blessings and Merry Christmas
Gorelick Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 8:51 AM
I do and I am..! Congrats on a clever write and win. BG
Callus Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 7:15 AM
This is so smooth flowing and witty, Arlene! Congratulations...a very merited win! // paul
Allison Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 4:23 AM
so so clever many congrats:-) hugs jan xxx
Mehta Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 4:18 AM
Very well composed write, congratulations on the win, Arlene
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 3:28 AM
I am feeling pretty jolly myself right now Arlene. I got a kick out of your poem because I could identify with Santa. Congrats on your win! I am still smiling.
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 1:02 AM
oh arlene, change it to Claus!! Other than that, this was PERFECT. one of my favorites in the contest. CUTE as can be. Congratulations.
Smith Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Uhhh! I seem to always miss a little something in forms! Lol... Thank you so very much for the placement in your contest, dear Andrea... Hugs.. Arlene
Sirak Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:41 AM
I wonder why Santa doesn't share his cookies with the reindeer, but then if he did they would be too fat to fly!
Jerden Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 9:28 PM
Ah, yes, "The Santa Clause"... Well done! Good luck in the contest!
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