Santa

Santa so fat in chimney got stuck swearing and hot he got in a muck kicking up much soot boot fell off his foot that night he was sure right out of luck written 11/30/2010 contest What's Up with Santa

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/11/2014 12:13:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Shadow.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/9/2014 7:15:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2014 5:24:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..What a mess to have to clean up on Christmas morn..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/3/2014 11:29:00 AM

Hahaha Santa poor darling, buck up, buck does not stop here. O Shadow. you should not give him much chocolate or ice-cream. LoveXXX rajat

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2014 11:50:00 AM

ty Rajat as if I would lol a glass of sherry and one mincepie hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2014 3:56:00 PM

This is nicely rhymed and a fun limerick, Shadow. Lots of Santa poems over at Soup these days!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2014 11:49:00 AM

yes a great way of setting the Christmas spirit ty Andrea hugs

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/2/2014 3:21:00 PM

smiling thinking linda of dressing up as santa sitting all alone oh oh oh gone backwards another christmas love how this drew for me

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2014 11:47:00 AM

lol ty Liam old pal to be sure a grand Santa you would make hugs

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/2/2014 11:14:00 AM

Dear Shadow, You had me giggling thinking of poor Santa stuck in the chimney. As a child I could never figure out how he get down them. LOL I am out of town and just wanted to wish you a very happy holiday season and thank you for your friendship. Love and holiday blessings, Carolyn

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2014 11:46:00 AM

I hope you have a great time Carolyn season's greetings and ty for your support hugs

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/1/2014 12:09:00 AM

Fun and excellent penned. Enjoyed it. Tfs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/1/2014 12:22:00 AM

ty Ravi hugs

Mazhar Butt

Date: 11/30/2014 6:05:00 PM

Nice imagination... I hope you will enjoy this 'sequel' jotted down by me:) As thin as a thistle Santa in chimney got stuck In the passage heavily blocked by years of muck struggling through the soot Santa fell down like a coot And came out looking like a dark fancy duck.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/1/2014 12:22:00 AM

I like it Mazhar it needs work on syllable count 9/9/7/7/9 ty hugs