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Sands of Time

SANDS OF TIME My child the struggler- Half-buried, sand-holer From fractious family. Each christmas hollowly Joyless in the cold Tracks in the snow, A pointless journey A useless straggler My boy filled the void, Though almost destroyed. Controlling with care And knowing when and where Trying to survive In that world half-alive My man's half-drowned In the sand pit around. My wife seeks my pain As each running grain Pours back, fills the hole. She rescues my soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/9/2010 12:02:00 PM
silent as it all satands still,, enjoyed your poem,.p.d.
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Date: 10/9/2010 8:20:00 AM
very creative and interesting write on Sands of time, very realistic
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