Sandcastles of Time

We erected sandcastles on the seashore.
I designed them and you painstakingly formed them
into edifices, complete with turrets, flags, and moats.
We even won the contest for the most authentic.
Now the only castles we build are in our imaginations.
You don’t even recognize your queen anymore, and I 
am sad at the ravages that Alzheimers has afflicted my king.
Oh, to be young again, sit at sunset and watch the tide
sweep away our castles, slowly and gently.
Perhaps we can sit on the balcony tonight and hold hands.
This may be the day you once more call me queen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 10, 2016 at 9:26 PM
Iris, you have a great way of expressing yourself through poetry, XOX ~LINDA~
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May 8, 2016 at 3:14 AM
IRIS, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT
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July 22, 2013 at 9:20 PM
Hi Iris, very sweet, and pretty... enjoyed~ SKAT
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July 22, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Iris, this is such a touching write. Quite sad, really. Well done. Love, Kim
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