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Sandcastles

Sandcastle crumbles Waves wash away residue Taking dreams with it won 9th place

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Harry Horsman

Date: 12/9/2010 12:06:00 AM

love this Joyce, so much in so few words. congrats on the win in the contest. Harry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Joyce in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2010 10:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Joyce. This is one of the best entries! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 10:02:00 PM

VERY good one, Joyce, ME really likes. and congratulations.

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 7:29:00 PM

Congrats Joyce on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:42:00 PM

Congrats Joyce my friend on another big win in Irma's contest with this super entry ... enjoy your top ten win and sweet success with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations Joyce, on your 9th place. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 4:36:00 AM

Well deserved win with great images...luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:22:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Joyce

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:40:00 PM

JOYCE~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/5/2010 8:44:00 PM

How true in so many ways, Joyce. Really enjoyed your take on life with this one. Dan C

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/5/2010 8:40:00 PM

So true. Many congratulations Joyce for this win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2010 12:08:00 PM

Good one..Very descriptive work..Kind of sad feeling..Sara

Diane Locksley

Date: 12/4/2010 7:03:00 AM

A memorable poem, Joyce. We try to hold onto our dreams, but time takes them away from us.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/4/2010 6:51:00 AM

A sad thought, Joyce, but also very truthful. Hope this ranks high in the contest, dear, and I finished making your Christmas surprise last night. Hope to get it in the mail on Monday so you can enjoy it over the holidays. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/4/2010 3:36:00 AM

Nice expression taking dreams away it.. Joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/4/2010 1:24:00 AM

What a true picture Joyce. All the best for the contest.