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Sandcastles

Sandcastle crumbles
Waves wash away residue
Taking dreams with it

won 9th place

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Harry Horsman

December 9, 2010 at 12:06 AM

love this Joyce, so much in so few words. congrats on the win in the contest. Harry

Sara Kendrick

December 7, 2010 at 3:19 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 7, 2010 at 5:57 AM

Congratulations on your win Joyce in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

December 6, 2010 at 10:39 PM

Congratulations on your win, Joyce. This is one of the best entries! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

December 6, 2010 at 10:02 PM

VERY good one, Joyce, ME really likes. and congratulations.

Kash Poet

December 6, 2010 at 7:29 PM

Congrats Joyce on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 6, 2010 at 3:42 PM

Congrats Joyce my friend on another big win in Irma's contest with this super entry ... enjoy your top ten win and sweet success with luv..

John Freeman

December 6, 2010 at 8:32 AM

Congratulations Joyce, on your 9th place. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

December 6, 2010 at 4:36 AM

Well deserved win with great images...luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 6, 2010 at 2:22 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Joyce

Skat A

December 5, 2010 at 9:40 PM

JOYCE~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Daniel Cwiak

December 5, 2010 at 8:44 PM

How true in so many ways, Joyce. Really enjoyed your take on life with this one. Dan C

Tahera Mannan

December 5, 2010 at 8:40 PM

So true. Many congratulations Joyce for this win.

Sara Kendrick

December 4, 2010 at 12:08 PM

Good one..Very descriptive work..Kind of sad feeling..Sara

Diane Locksley

December 4, 2010 at 7:03 AM

A memorable poem, Joyce. We try to hold onto our dreams, but time takes them away from us.

Carolyn Devonshire

December 4, 2010 at 6:51 AM

A sad thought, Joyce, but also very truthful. Hope this ranks high in the contest, dear, and I finished making your Christmas surprise last night. Hope to get it in the mail on Monday so you can enjoy it over the holidays. Love and blessings, Carolyn