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Sandcastle of Dreams

~Sand-Castle~

***relaxing medicine***

dreams of the sand
Underneath the ocean stars
Sleeping with the wind


***the beast dreams***

Mr. Sandman's bag
Romantic, like pouring rain
Seashore bash


***the world is home***

Wishing well mirage
Homeless but rich sandcastle
Ocean wave pillow


***it takes two***

Heaven passionate kiss
 hands create a mote
Drawbridge of sea shells


***hungry wings***

First class bay front seat
Seagulls land on tower
Essence of bird droll

***colliding fantasy***

Adventure hot day
Knocking beauty of the day
fantasy sunrise

     ~Sk~

Copyright © Skat A | Year Posted 2010

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Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/5/2016 12:59:00 PM A very creative and free flowing poem, Skat. It is the first poem of yours I read. I was intrigued by the Senryu form. I'm trying to read as many of the different poetic forms as possible. See which ones fit my style of writing. Much respect to all you poetesses/poets who have mastered a variety of the forms. I liked this one though. Very creative use of varying sand images. Also, ty for reading my poem "From Death to Life." Love and peace to you. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/5/2016 8:31:00 AM These senryu are all lovely and creative, Skat, but I have nos 1 and 4 as favourires! Now go find a pen and write us some more of these:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Poesy Relish Date: 1/20/2015 1:04:00 AM Could experience the feel of beach... beautiful write... Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 10/24/2014 4:48:00 PM This was cool to read, like I was on the sand right there with you, and what a way to end the moment, hope he helps build sandcastles next time ;) Login to Reply

Faye Gibson Date: 4/18/2014 8:48:00 PM Enjoyed this...could see the sun and the hot sand. Login to Reply

Johnny Rhinem Date: 12/24/2013 2:41:00 PM † Smile, Enchanting Save The Ending Which Made Me Laugh *:* Waddling Past Timeless Portraits Through Endless Corridores Poo Poo Trails His Tiny Baby *.* Climbing A Stool Into Her Window Well Gazing Beyound The Glass *) Sparkling Twinkling Eyes At All The Beauty, They Find *:*(* A Kiss As Dreams Innocent Fingers Tracing Love's Sash.... MERRY CHRISTMAS ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, John Login to Reply

Robin Davis Date: 10/1/2013 7:53:00 PM SKAT These are some creative and unique little poems. The imagery is superb and imaginative. I tried a Haiku once but couldn't do it. I am a rhymer. LOL nice job Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 9/18/2013 4:50:00 PM It is a sad thing when our dreams have to get ruined by others. All we can do is watch as they crumble down around us like a falling sandcastle. But, we can always build a new one! Excellent poem, SKAT, I really enjoyed it!...Thank you for the kind comments, as always! :) Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 5/15/2013 10:56:00 AM A sweet picture of wonderful dream of childhood days adorned with golden words. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 4/17/2013 9:48:00 AM This is an exquisite poem my dearest Skat! Soo love it & sooo enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed and grace-filled day! love much, Leonora Login to Reply

Melani Udaeta Date: 12/7/2012 7:45:00 PM This is fantastic. I love the ocean and I enjoyed this! ~Mel Login to Reply

Margeret Bailey Date: 6/18/2011 9:06:00 PM Interesting write! Login to Reply

Manouchka Doreus Date: 5/29/2011 4:21:00 AM i loved this!!!! no wonder you won Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 1/20/2011 6:17:00 AM Hi SKAT! Enjoyed the reado of each of your Haikus! And thank you for your congrats on my Haiku-win. Have a great day!...Love, Gert Login to Reply

Eiken Laan Date: 1/17/2011 2:53:00 AM Skat, you are a superb haiku writer, I love all of these, so so beautiful, amazing images, you bring me sand and sea, waves and serenity. Login to Reply

Kevin Semeniuk Date: 1/8/2011 10:53:00 AM a great group of thoughts and images! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/31/2010 6:01:00 PM Happy New year Skat...lovely short poems! Light & Love Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 12/8/2010 8:58:00 AM Fantastic group of Haiku's and how do you think of so many when I sit and think about doing one. Awesome. God Bless Phyl Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 12/7/2010 12:10:00 PM Nice work. I really like the one about the seagulls. Good luck n the contest. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/6/2010 10:24:00 PM Skat, those last two were really creative and unique. Now I see why you wanted a sandcastle contest!!! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/6/2010 3:57:00 PM Fascinating and Fabulous and FANTABULOUS Irma my BFF forever.. this is awesome as always when u write and so wonderful with those headings above each Haiku... stupendous my friend.. again..so thankxxx for the 1st place win in your contest... made my day that much more better because of the win but mostly because of our friendship luv.. Login to Reply

Eamon Duffin Date: 12/6/2010 9:37:00 AM Hi. Honoured to receive such a great result in your contest, honoured and absolutely delighted. Loved the above , what I aim for. Thanking you, Eamon Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 12/6/2010 9:15:00 AM Good Morning Skat, This is wonderful and it touches my heart. Thank you for letting me enter your contest, win or lose I loved the experience. Fun don't ya know Having such fun with you and all the soup poets! As Always, Shar Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/6/2010 8:18:00 AM Nice thoughts, very meaning and innovative haiku with apt images, Skat. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 12/6/2010 8:11:00 AM Thank you for the big smile this morning over here in chilly NY... You would have won your own contest with this one.lol thanks for the high placement in contest, it wa a fun write and a very good contest....luv Michael Login to Reply

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