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Sandcastle of Dreams

~Sand-Castle~ ***relaxing medicine*** dreams of the sand Underneath the ocean stars Sleeping with the wind ***the beast dreams*** Mr. Sandman's bag Romantic, like pouring rain Seashore bash ***the world is home*** Wishing well mirage Homeless but rich sandcastle Ocean wave pillow ***it takes two*** Heaven passionate kiss hands create a mote Drawbridge of sea shells ***hungry wings*** First class bay front seat Seagulls land on tower Essence of bird droll ***colliding fantasy*** Adventure hot day Knocking beauty of the day fantasy sunrise ~Sk~

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/5/2016 12:59:00 PM

A very creative and free flowing poem, Skat. It is the first poem of yours I read. I was intrigued by the Senryu form. I'm trying to read as many of the different poetic forms as possible. See which ones fit my style of writing. Much respect to all you poetesses/poets who have mastered a variety of the forms. I liked this one though. Very creative use of varying sand images. Also, ty for reading my poem "From Death to Life." Love and peace to you.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/5/2016 8:31:00 AM

These senryu are all lovely and creative, Skat, but I have nos 1 and 4 as favourires! Now go find a pen and write us some more of these:) Hugs // paul

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/20/2015 1:04:00 AM

Could experience the feel of beach... beautiful write...

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/24/2014 4:48:00 PM

This was cool to read, like I was on the sand right there with you, and what a way to end the moment, hope he helps build sandcastles next time ;)

Faye Gibson

Date: 4/18/2014 8:48:00 PM

Enjoyed this...could see the sun and the hot sand.

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 12/24/2013 2:41:00 PM

† Smile, Enchanting Save The Ending Which Made Me Laugh *:* Waddling Past Timeless Portraits Through Endless Corridores Poo Poo Trails His Tiny Baby *.* Climbing A Stool Into Her Window Well Gazing Beyound The Glass *) Sparkling Twinkling Eyes At All The Beauty, They Find *:*(* A Kiss As Dreams Innocent Fingers Tracing Love's Sash.... MERRY CHRISTMAS ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, John

Robin Davis

Date: 10/1/2013 7:53:00 PM

SKAT These are some creative and unique little poems. The imagery is superb and imaginative. I tried a Haiku once but couldn't do it. I am a rhymer. LOL nice job

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/18/2013 4:50:00 PM

It is a sad thing when our dreams have to get ruined by others. All we can do is watch as they crumble down around us like a falling sandcastle. But, we can always build a new one! Excellent poem, SKAT, I really enjoyed it!...Thank you for the kind comments, as always! :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/15/2013 10:56:00 AM

A sweet picture of wonderful dream of childhood days adorned with golden words. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

Len Gasun

Date: 4/17/2013 9:48:00 AM

This is an exquisite poem my dearest Skat! Soo love it & sooo enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed and grace-filled day! love much, Leonora

Melani Udaeta

Date: 12/7/2012 7:45:00 PM

This is fantastic. I love the ocean and I enjoyed this! ~Mel

Margeret Bailey

Date: 6/18/2011 9:06:00 PM

Interesting write!

Manouchka Doreus

Date: 5/29/2011 4:21:00 AM

i loved this!!!! no wonder you won

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/20/2011 6:17:00 AM

Hi SKAT! Enjoyed the reado of each of your Haikus! And thank you for your congrats on my Haiku-win. Have a great day!...Love, Gert

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/17/2011 2:53:00 AM

Skat, you are a superb haiku writer, I love all of these, so so beautiful, amazing images, you bring me sand and sea, waves and serenity.

Rick Parise

Date: 1/11/2011 10:52:00 AM

Enjoyed this series of poems~I wanted to let you know I am very pleazzzed with my placement in your "Hot Air Balloon Contest" Yippy Skip~So glad you found it "A Keeper" Take care girl !!!!Much Love~Rick

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 1/8/2011 10:53:00 AM

a great group of thoughts and images!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/31/2010 6:01:00 PM

Happy New year Skat...lovely short poems! Light & Love

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/8/2010 8:58:00 AM

Fantastic group of Haiku's and how do you think of so many when I sit and think about doing one. Awesome. God Bless Phyl

Rick Parise

Date: 12/7/2010 12:37:00 PM

Nice group of Haiku's ~ Thank you for my win in your Halloween contest LOL~Cool !!!~God bless you!!!

Diane Locksley

Date: 12/7/2010 12:10:00 PM

Nice work. I really like the one about the seagulls. Good luck n the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 10:24:00 PM

Skat, those last two were really creative and unique. Now I see why you wanted a sandcastle contest!!! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:57:00 PM

Fascinating and Fabulous and FANTABULOUS Irma my BFF forever.. this is awesome as always when u write and so wonderful with those headings above each Haiku... stupendous my friend.. again..so thankxxx for the 1st place win in your contest... made my day that much more better because of the win but mostly because of our friendship luv..

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/6/2010 9:37:00 AM

Hi. Honoured to receive such a great result in your contest, honoured and absolutely delighted. Loved the above , what I aim for. Thanking you, Eamon

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/6/2010 9:15:00 AM

Good Morning Skat, This is wonderful and it touches my heart. Thank you for letting me enter your contest, win or lose I loved the experience. Fun don't ya know Having such fun with you and all the soup poets! As Always, Shar