Skat A Poet Senryu

Sandcastle of Dreams

~Sand-Castle~

***relaxing medicine***

dreams of the sand
Underneath the ocean stars
Sleeping with the wind


***the beast dreams***

Mr. Sandman's bag
Romantic, like pouring rain
Seashore bash


***the world is home***

Wishing well mirage
Homeless but rich sandcastle
Ocean wave pillow


***it takes two***

Heaven passionate kiss
 hands create a mote
Drawbridge of sea shells


***hungry wings***

First class bay front seat
Seagulls land on tower
Essence of bird droll

***colliding fantasy***

Adventure hot day
Knocking beauty of the day
fantasy sunrise

     ~Sk~

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 5, 2016 at 12:59 PM A very creative and free flowing poem, Skat. It is the first poem of yours I read. I was intrigued by the Senryu form. I'm trying to read as many of the different poetic forms as possible. See which ones fit my style of writing. Much respect to all you poetesses/poets who have mastered a variety of the forms. I liked this one though. Very creative use of varying sand images. Also, ty for reading my poem "From Death to Life." Love and peace to you.

Paul Callus January 5, 2016 at 8:31 AM These senryu are all lovely and creative, Skat, but I have nos 1 and 4 as favourires! Now go find a pen and write us some more of these:) Hugs // paul

Poesy Relish January 20, 2015 at 1:04 AM Could experience the feel of beach... beautiful write...

Casarah Nance October 24, 2014 at 4:48 PM This was cool to read, like I was on the sand right there with you, and what a way to end the moment, hope he helps build sandcastles next time ;)

Faye Gibson April 18, 2014 at 8:48 PM Enjoyed this...could see the sun and the hot sand.

Johnny Rhinem December 24, 2013 at 2:41 PM † Smile, Enchanting Save The Ending Which Made Me Laugh *:* Waddling Past Timeless Portraits Through Endless Corridores Poo Poo Trails His Tiny Baby *.* Climbing A Stool Into Her Window Well Gazing Beyound The Glass *) Sparkling Twinkling Eyes At All The Beauty, They Find *:*(* A Kiss As Dreams Innocent Fingers Tracing Love's Sash.... MERRY CHRISTMAS ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, John

Robin Davis October 1, 2013 at 7:53 PM SKAT These are some creative and unique little poems. The imagery is superb and imaginative. I tried a Haiku once but couldn't do it. I am a rhymer. LOL nice job

Kelly Deschler September 18, 2013 at 4:50 PM It is a sad thing when our dreams have to get ruined by others. All we can do is watch as they crumble down around us like a falling sandcastle. But, we can always build a new one! Excellent poem, SKAT, I really enjoyed it!...Thank you for the kind comments, as always! :)

Bl Devnath May 15, 2013 at 10:56 AM A sweet picture of wonderful dream of childhood days adorned with golden words. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

Len Gasun April 17, 2013 at 9:48 AM This is an exquisite poem my dearest Skat! Soo love it & sooo enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed and grace-filled day! love much, Leonora

Melani Udaeta December 7, 2012 at 7:45 PM This is fantastic. I love the ocean and I enjoyed this! ~Mel

Margeret Bailey June 18, 2011 at 9:06 PM Interesting write!

Manouchka Doreus May 29, 2011 at 4:21 AM i loved this!!!! no wonder you won

Gert W. Knop January 20, 2011 at 6:17 AM Hi SKAT! Enjoyed the reado of each of your Haikus! And thank you for your congrats on my Haiku-win. Have a great day!...Love, Gert

Eiken Laan January 17, 2011 at 2:53 AM Skat, you are a superb haiku writer, I love all of these, so so beautiful, amazing images, you bring me sand and sea, waves and serenity.

Kevin Semeniuk January 8, 2011 at 10:53 AM a great group of thoughts and images!

Debbie Guzzi December 31, 2010 at 6:01 PM Happy New year Skat...lovely short poems! Light & Love

Phyllis Babcock December 8, 2010 at 8:58 AM Fantastic group of Haiku's and how do you think of so many when I sit and think about doing one. Awesome. God Bless Phyl

Diane Locksley December 7, 2010 at 12:10 PM Nice work. I really like the one about the seagulls. Good luck n the contest.

Andrea Dietrich December 6, 2010 at 10:24 PM Skat, those last two were really creative and unique. Now I see why you wanted a sandcastle contest!!! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 6, 2010 at 3:57 PM Fascinating and Fabulous and FANTABULOUS Irma my BFF forever.. this is awesome as always when u write and so wonderful with those headings above each Haiku... stupendous my friend.. again..so thankxxx for the 1st place win in your contest... made my day that much more better because of the win but mostly because of our friendship luv..

Eamon Duffin December 6, 2010 at 9:37 AM Hi. Honoured to receive such a great result in your contest, honoured and absolutely delighted. Loved the above , what I aim for. Thanking you, Eamon

Sharon Ruebel December 6, 2010 at 9:15 AM Good Morning Skat, This is wonderful and it touches my heart. Thank you for letting me enter your contest, win or lose I loved the experience. Fun don't ya know Having such fun with you and all the soup poets! As Always, Shar

Dr.Ram Mehta December 6, 2010 at 8:18 AM Nice thoughts, very meaning and innovative haiku with apt images, Skat.

Michael J. Falotico December 6, 2010 at 8:11 AM Thank you for the big smile this morning over here in chilly NY... You would have won your own contest with this one.lol thanks for the high placement in contest, it wa a fun write and a very good contest....luv Michael

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