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Sandcastle

My sandcastle cries As the tide washes over It with a strong force.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Benjamin in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:54:00 PM

Interesting personificatioin, Benjamin .Congratulations on your win!

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 5:41:00 PM

Congrats Benjamin on your win.Kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:31:00 PM

Congrats Benjamin on your super win in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry luv.. enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations Benjamin, on your success, agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:14:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Benjamin

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:31:00 PM

Benjamin~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2010 5:36:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this very creative work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/5/2010 10:15:00 AM

Really like your use of personification in giving life to the sandcastles. They appear to be a metaphor for dreams/aspirations as well. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/5/2010 4:16:00 AM

Nice haiku with good images on sandcastle. Benjamin