Sandcastle

My sandcastle cries
As the tide washes over
It with a strong force.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations on your win Benjamin in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:54 PM
Interesting personificatioin, Benjamin .Congratulations on your win!
Poet Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 5:41 PM
Congrats Benjamin on your win.Kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 3:31 PM
Congrats Benjamin on your super win in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry luv.. enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv..
Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations Benjamin, on your success, agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:14 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Benjamin
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December 5, 2010 at 9:31 PM
Benjamin~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 5:36 PM
Good luck in the contest with this very creative work..Sara
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December 5, 2010 at 10:15 AM
Really like your use of personification in giving life to the sandcastles. They appear to be a metaphor for dreams/aspirations as well. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 4:16 AM
Nice haiku with good images on sandcastle. Benjamin
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