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POTW (poem of the week) Sunday February 9th 2025

Flip flops and straw hat adorn him, beach wear suits him nicely Kind is he to her as he scoops into a bucket measuring precisely Casted are his piteous passions in sunstruck warm sands Gently shaping and capturing her likeness, she is in skilled hands Stooping over chin to knee he bares bronze shoulders glimmering Her features delicate, her hair etched in his mind flowing, shimmering An energy is sensed as sand and water caress through his fingers Behold if only Aphrodite answers his prayer, he pauses and lingers Recollection clears a birth, breath of life be given this inanimate object A saintly face faintly appears, he’s fallen in love with his imminent project Sculpting feminine curves slowly surfacing, an hourglass figure shaped An alluring amazon controls his very soul, an apotheosis angel draped Belief in a statue which comes to life, vehemently pangs the phenomenon Alas the last touches fini, fervently he unveils his seaside Pygmalion And without further ado, emerging from the ivory sand, he prizes An obsession his idée fixe at the edge of the pier, a sand goddess arises

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Date: 4/25/2025 5:06:00 AM
Belated Congrats on POTW Anaya….well deserved with this wonderful creative write! Debx
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Date: 4/25/2025 9:52:00 AM
Ah thank you Debs! xhugs
Date: 3/7/2025 6:25:00 AM
Dear Anaya, Belated congratulations on the POTW honor for this sensual and very visual piece. I will now fav it. Have a great weekend. You are most talented dear poetess..
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Date: 3/7/2025 7:52:00 AM
There is nothing like the honor of potw. Happy to share with you in the celebration, Nancy. Ty so much for your encouragement and kindness!
Date: 2/16/2025 12:41:00 PM
Sensuously work, very pretty rhymes
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Date: 2/19/2025 6:40:00 PM
Belated thank you's, Paige!
Date: 2/15/2025 4:23:00 PM
You’re wonderfully creative and rightly so featured! Congratulations on potw!
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Date: 2/16/2025 8:36:00 AM
Ty, Karen! nothing like the honor of potw. Happy to share with you in the celebration!
Date: 2/15/2025 1:27:00 PM
Anaya, I suppose it's fortunate we have to take people for what they are. There are some sci-fi films about men having relations with their idea of perfection. We who live in the real world know that part of the fun is dealing with all the flaws and disagreements. LOL and smiles!!
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Date: 2/15/2025 1:36:00 PM
Lol, I am delighted you found amusement in a man's idea of a perfect sand goddess. "All" the flaws, too funny. It's work! Ty for sharing your thoughts, Duke. Enjoyed:)
Date: 2/15/2025 12:40:00 AM
Take us with you, we said and you did, couplet by couplet. Warmest congratulations on POTW, Anaya, superbly penned
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Date: 2/15/2025 9:48:00 AM
Delighted that you enjoyed it, Seeker. It is such a nice surprise, nothing like the honor of potw. Happy to share with you in the celebration!
Date: 2/14/2025 9:24:00 AM
Congrats, Anaya! So cute!
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Date: 2/14/2025 1:43:00 PM
Hey Kimmy! It is such a nice surprise, nothing like the honor of potw. Happy to share with you in the celebration! xo
Date: 2/13/2025 4:03:00 PM
Wow, I'd love this. You help us see her better. Congrats on your POTD!
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Date: 2/13/2025 5:10:00 PM
Great comment, Benjamin, it has made my day. It is such a nice surprise, nothing like the honor of potw. Happy to share with you in the celebration!
Date: 2/12/2025 8:30:00 PM
Congratulations on receiving the poem of the week honour Anaya. I enjoyed reading about this beach boy and goddess, left wondering if it ended in him having romantic success… Beryl
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Date: 2/13/2025 8:02:00 AM
It is such a nice surprise, nothing like the honor of potw. Happy to share with you in the celebration, Beryl. Ty! xo
Date: 2/12/2025 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTW Anaya. xx
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Date: 2/12/2025 10:15:00 AM
It is such a nice surprise, nothing like the honor of potw. Happy to share with you in the celebration, John. Ty! xo
Date: 2/12/2025 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW. Well done.
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Date: 2/12/2025 10:14:00 AM
It is such a nice surprise, nothing like the honor of potw. Happy to share with you in the celebration, Daisy. Ty! xo
Date: 2/12/2025 1:10:00 AM
- Excellent poem... :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.w., Anaya :) - hugs
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Date: 2/12/2025 10:13:00 AM
It is such a nice surprise, nothing like the honor of potw. Happy to share with you in the celebration, Anne-Lise. Ty ~xo
Date: 2/11/2025 7:52:00 AM
Awww how nice to see you featured
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Date: 2/11/2025 8:58:00 AM
Ty, Tommy!
Date: 2/10/2025 9:36:00 AM
Hello Anaya......This is a very enjoyable and dreamy poem especially when I am here in The Dairy State and it is extremely cold, and I didn't know Mrs. Right can be found at the beach. Congrats on POTW.
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Date: 2/11/2025 8:57:00 AM
Hello! Glad you enjoyed, Michael. Hope you find her lol. TY for sharing... Keep warm ~Anaya
Date: 2/10/2025 6:31:00 AM
My Dear Anaya, this is breathtaking, just like a tide that pulls the heart deeper with every line. I think your imagery is alive, sculpted with the same devotion as your Pygmalion’s hands. It certainly lingers, shimmering between myth and longing. Absolutely stunning. Congrats on POTW!!! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/11/2025 8:50:00 AM
Ty, Daniel it is always good to see you and share your thoughts, so glad that you enjoyed this one. Winter blessings to you!
Date: 2/9/2025 4:30:00 PM
' breath of life be given this inanimate object. ' I'm not sure why, but this thought reminds me of the movie " Mannequin. " And he was in love with his creation as well. :) I like that movie. You've painted such vivid images with your words, Anaya. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/11/2025 8:48:00 AM
It's so good to hear our thoughts, Brandy poetess. Fun movie! Ty for sharing in the celebration it is a nice surprise, both you and potw! hugs
Date: 2/9/2025 2:28:00 PM
Ah! Congratulations Anaya, Great to see this one rewarded with POTW, it is simply sublime, and most deserving of the accolade, still the contest to go, so could reach even higher status, happy Super Bowl Sunday indeed, Cheers David
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Date: 2/9/2025 3:33:00 PM
TY! It means a lot to me that you, David are here to celebrate this happy day with me. CHEERS!
Date: 2/9/2025 1:19:00 PM
Your allusion to Pygmalion is a delightful, sensuous intrigue. Whether it be myth or any desired life companion, creating one's object of affection from beach sand might just work. You have developed your own voice, one with feeling, lyricism, and often sharply opinionated. Good work. Congratulations on your POTW! Robert
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Date: 2/9/2025 1:43:00 PM
You are too kind Robbie, and one of my most treasured poets. Ha ha, according to my political rants, yes, I'm strongly opinionated, thanks for the laugh, and a few years of enjoying your poetic limericks. TY! Hope you have a happy Superbowl Sunday!! The pres., will be there. :):)
Date: 2/9/2025 9:31:00 AM
Dearest Anaya, soulful poet, your enticing poetic artistry shines in the rich imagery, mythology and metaphors of this beautiful poem. I was captivated by your verse. I especially loved "An alluring amazon controls his very soul, an apotheosis angel draped" - ah, just breathtaking! But every verse is golden, your last couplet a grand finale to a textured "shimmering" piece! Here's to "sand promises"! Cheers! Warmest wishes my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/9/2025 2:25:00 PM
Happy Super Bowl day to you too and my heartiest congrats for your well deserved POTW honors! A round of applause and a raise of the glass to you and your fantastic poetry.. clink! Enjoy the worthy accolades my sweet friend:)
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Date: 2/9/2025 12:42:00 PM
Have a Happy Superbowl Day!
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Date: 2/9/2025 12:10:00 PM
Oh my, Susan we were just commenting/replying on your most recent post "Smugglers Boat" and a most heart-wrenching post, it hit hard! "this is a '"world matter and not just in the States." I chose to show that migrants around the world are facing similar dire situations and tragic outcomes"...I'm grateful you did. and grateful for the congrats on today's potw surprise! Ty Cheers ;)
Date: 2/9/2025 7:17:00 AM
‘He pauses with the water moving through his fingers , feeling the energy.’ A very visual work Anaya. Congratulations on a well written poem.
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Date: 2/9/2025 12:13:00 PM
Hello! Glad you enjoyed, Margaret. A piece I truly enjoyed based on the myth! Ty
Date: 2/9/2025 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. What a wonderful/fun "Sand Promises" write. You are making me want to be at the beach. So much fun to see the sand sculpting. Have a great day with your win.................
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Date: 2/9/2025 12:15:00 PM
Right! Paula I'm feeling the same way, PCH is now open to the public...can't wait. Yes, the photo I took at Santa Barbara Pier. Ty for stopping in, sweet poetess!
Date: 2/8/2025 7:27:00 AM
Dear sweet anaya, i love your use of mythology and how youv played around with words throughout, so creative! You really have a very innovative way of expressing or phrasing things and painting imagery! I love so many lines in this especially the flow and rhymes! “ Her features delicate, her hair etched in his mind flowing, shimmering ” so sun kissed! And stunning! And such an imaginative poem, absolutely loved reading this! Sending you light always! You are a natural with rhymes!FAVE
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Date: 2/8/2025 1:36:00 PM
Ink I'm so happy to read your review, you made my Saturday. Glad you enjoyed and Ty for the fave! :)
Date: 2/7/2025 2:51:00 PM
A masterfully crafted poem Anaya, you take the reader through the sculpting process with finesse and polish, really is a superb piece of work and flows seamlessly throughout, with a last line to die for, just before the goddess arises, gotta be a fave, cheers David
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Date: 2/7/2025 3:32:00 PM
My hard work payed off, I'm pleased to hear your kind review and a fave. I'm grateful of course. TY, David. Cheers! You should sponsor contests! ;)
Date: 2/7/2025 12:51:00 PM
Hmmm sculpting the ideal woman. I'd have to think about that a bit before starting. I like your fantasy write Anaya. Soupie
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Date: 2/7/2025 1:44:00 PM
Got it! I've never used that phrase and I've been watching Wheel -Of -Fortune!...thanks, Tommy
Date: 2/7/2025 11:01:00 AM
Love this version of Greek Mythology, as you know, George Bernard Shaw wrote the play Pygmalion later turned into the musical My Fair Lady. Your poem is a refreshing addition to the indelible myth. Wish I had Pygmalion's knack, Robert
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Date: 2/7/2025 1:48:00 PM
Lol. Thank you, Robbie! :) Wishing you all that you desire!
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