Sand Box

Sahara north african voice hit th' desert 
whimpering a cry a muffler left goodbye
to where sand storms swallow an hurt
th' scent of a women to dare to try 
th' garment's thou used to wear 
e're live in a sand box untouch'd spill
still looking for e're soft hands pare
walk'd th' flaming sand up a hill
longing to touch again e're skin
search'd for days near tho far away
having illusional visions of e're spin
opened th' box to win a day 
an all e're clothes coverd' th' desert hence
with winds up shifting e're scarves fence



10/13/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/24/2016 10:26:00 PM
I find myself drawn lately to the sonnet form, and you do them justice, great read Talin.
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Date: 10/13/2016 12:09:00 PM
Just a hint of political satire in this sonnet. Very well written, Talin.
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 10/13/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thank you daniel... I loved the idea of the sand box the topic itself can write many fields..
Date: 10/13/2016 9:16:00 AM
Awesome Sonnet Talin:) // love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/13/2016 1:38:00 PM
Thankx Anu :)) i love it too hh ii)
Date: 10/13/2016 4:51:00 AM
Beautifully stormy and mysterious your poem dear, Talin. It carries the reader to the heart of the desert wondering if will get a glimpse of the woman! Excellent!
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 10/13/2016 1:07:00 PM
Speechless.. U made my heart smile Thank you
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