Sand - Haiku
sandcastle
grains of quartz sculpture
surrender
a ghost of past strength
sand storm
soft sands harmless
until rallied by whipping winds
rising in power
Susan Ashley
October 18, 2021
~ Seventh Place ~
Premiere Contest: Lune (Mixed Pair)
Sponsor: William Kekaula
sandcastle Lune: (syllable based: 5-3-5; PS)
sandstorm Lune: (word based: 3-5-3)
Copyright © Susan Ashley | Year Posted 2021
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