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The moon looks to be shining brightly right now. Our lives are shown to us in a short, quick show. There is no one else to blame but us for our flaws. It contrasts admirably with the way the wind blow. We can refer back to the flag by raising the billow. It's inconvenient to be forced to limit one's view. The most tragic loss is our way of thinking. In a state of confusion, no one is striking.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/31/2021 7:45:00 PM
"There is no one else to blame but us for our flaw.'~ Quite right... ! We are the makers of our own destiny ! Great thoughts dear friend Lasaad !
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Date: 12/31/2021 12:36:00 PM
Hello Lasaad, right there is no one else to blame but ourselves for our flow. I like the 5th line and 6th line of this poem. Happy New Yeat. All the best for the New Year.
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Date: 12/31/2021 11:11:00 AM
Lasaad~ how poignant "The most tragic loss is our way of thinking".....says it all! Blessings in the New Year! Paulette
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Date: 12/31/2021 10:42:00 AM
When heart and the brain are in balance--Much to gleam from the photo and your poem, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/31/2021 9:25:00 AM
Lasaad...Best wishes and blessings for 2022.
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