Sanctum

Through your heart’s inner sanctum,
I, savor your deep inhale
bringing you closer to God.
Will you be my breath?

© Drake J. Eszes

*Linda-Marie 'The Sweetheart of P.S.' contest: "SPICY": 4th place. YAY!*

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Kelly Deschler

September 3, 2013 at 5:36 PM

Amazing poem!....Hey, cool, I also have a poem titled, "Sanctum". Please, read it sometime.

Poet Tacito

September 3, 2013 at 5:40 PM

Neat! :) I'll check that out. Thanks so much, Kelly!

Andrea Dietrich

July 30, 2013 at 12:38 AM

Can't seem to find one I have not seen. but I don't think I have quite seen all your poems, have I? Anyway, I still think this is one of your best!!

Poet Tacito

July 30, 2013 at 6:20 AM

=D Aww! Thank you, Andrea!! You may or may not have. Either way, I appreciate you taking the time to look at my other work.

Charmaine Chircop

July 16, 2013 at 8:53 AM

When the emotion comes from the inner of the heart..It definitely reaches its peak of passion and love..To exhale is the following move..Well done Drake..

Poet Tacito

July 16, 2013 at 9:07 AM

Thank you so much, Charmaine! Yes, you couldn't be more right about that. =D

Debbie Duncan

June 18, 2013 at 11:16 AM

This is very nice,,,,And it won ;} I thank you for reading my Massacre,,, wrote it as I was reading snippets of stories. Your're right, it does go along with LOTR ;}

Poet Tacito

June 18, 2013 at 1:18 PM

It did. :) WOO HOO! You're quite welcome and I'm very happy you stopped by here. LOTR, YES! :)

Timothy Hicks

May 22, 2013 at 12:21 AM

I don't know much about dodoitsu, but the content was nice. Congrats on getting fourth place... it's really encouraging to get marked high in the contests and it's a nice way to test the poets creativity.

Poet Tacito

May 22, 2013 at 12:24 AM

I agree. I believe this was my 1st try on Dodoitsu. It was a good change of pace. Thanks so much!

Glenn Sentes

February 20, 2012 at 6:20 PM

Stunning write here, pal. Congratulations btw on your triumph in Linda Marie's contest.

Poet Tacito

February 20, 2012 at 8:31 PM

Thank you much, Glenn! =)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 7, 2011 at 1:28 AM

Congrats Drake on featured poem this week on PS... a wonderful write to share with luv my friend...hope all is well with u...

Poet Tacito

October 9, 2011 at 7:55 AM

Hi Linda-Marie! Thank you kindly! :) Things are continuing to come together nicely.

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 3, 2011 at 11:35 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Drake. Love, Carol

Poet Tacito

October 9, 2011 at 7:54 AM

Thank you, Carol! :)

Elizabeth Wesley

September 26, 2011 at 8:32 AM

You can when I exhale. Lovely verse to think upon.

Poet Tacito

September 26, 2011 at 8:35 AM

Nice! Thank you. :)

Poet Tacito

March 1, 2011 at 8:04 AM

Hey Karen! Well, I do thank you for stopping by and reading this. =)

Karen Croft

March 1, 2011 at 7:54 AM

interesting poem!!! karen croft

Poet Tacito

February 15, 2011 at 7:25 AM

Awesome of you to say Robert, you will very soon. =)

Robert Pettit

February 9, 2011 at 5:03 PM

Congratulations on winning in the contest. I want to see some more fine writings from you very soon.

Poet Tacito

January 25, 2011 at 7:36 PM

That's very sweet of you to say. Just spoken from the heart with this piece. Thank you, Catie. =)

Poet Tacito

January 25, 2011 at 5:32 AM

Good morning Hitendra! That's very kind of you to say. Thank you for that! Nice to meet you! =)

Dr Hitendra Mehta

January 25, 2011 at 3:54 AM

Congrats Drake on big win with this juicy one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta

Poet Tacito

January 24, 2011 at 5:54 AM

Thank you so much Carol! =)

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 23, 2011 at 8:12 AM

Congratulations Drake, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Poet Tacito

January 22, 2011 at 9:21 PM

@ Andrea, yeah I think it was a good closer to it all. An, exhale, if you will. Thank you so much. @ Dr. Ram, why thank you sir!!! Your poem was damn awesome! Congrats on your win as well! @ Robert, many thanks. I do appreciate that. =)

Robert Pettit

January 22, 2011 at 7:49 PM

Great entry. Congratulations on winning.

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 22, 2011 at 3:02 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of Linda, Drake

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2011 at 1:50 PM

I just love that last line, It's what makes this special. Congratulations, Drake.Luv, Andrea

Poet Tacito

January 22, 2011 at 11:19 AM

@ John, yes, exactly. The core of our essence. Thank you sir! @ Linda, that's really awesome. I truly enjoyed writing this for your contest. @ KC, much appreciated. =) @ James, awesome of you to say. Thank you kindly!