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Sanctuary of the Womb

The Sanctuary Of The Womb. . When this loveless world gets too much And my pain is such I lock the door and close the blinds And lick my wounds Within the confines Of my room Safe and soothing In darkness As a baby in the womb . Often my resolve and afflicted spirit Wears thin And I feel that my prison walls Are closing in I’m thrown into the deep end Of desperation Although I can not swim . The days turn into nightmares Sleep at night my escape Sudden realisation of my struggle Hits me like shell shock When I awake My mind is but a prison And my heart a heavy weight . Once my wounds have only Partially healed The prison door is open in my mind I unlock the door And open up the blinds. . Peter Dome©2020.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/21/2020 11:19:00 AM

Don't think of yourself as alone Peter, this year has been so difficult for so many people, and when one has unfeeling, bitter relatives, it feels even worse. You sound really down in the dumps my friend and almost desperate, but try talking to God as a friend, (I do) and tell him your problems, he is the Universe's best psychologist - your heart will feel so much lighter. Hugs, Jennifer.

Peter Dome
Date: 12/21/2020 2:18:00 PM

Hi Jennifer you always cheer me up. like a lot of us. my feet are stuck in the mud.I have to close my eyes when i see your pic. you look so beautiful., i cud fall for you.'' smile.''. thank you take care.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/21/2020 6:42:00 AM

Hi Peter, There is much sadness and despair in your heartfelt write. Nevertheless, I see good content and creative metaphors. I also a tinge of hope. I little bit of hope puts a big dent in despair and hopelessness. We all have had dark days and bouts of depression. It gets better, my friend, one day at a time:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/20/2020 5:20:00 PM

I see that you have suffered greatly... Here's hoping that you can find peace and serenity, Peter. ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/20/2020 1:15:00 PM

Hello Peter, I have days when I am depressed. When tis happens I listen to lots of music. Classical music works for me. so does meditation. I Aquarius and Pisces .Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/21/2020 10:54:00 AM

Hello Peter Dome, the baroque sounds very interesting to me. I read one of the comments from one of the poems that you told the person. I am a bit of both. Enjoy your day my friend. x

Peter Dome
Date: 12/20/2020 2:31:00 PM

Oh no not you as well my friend. so sad.I love classical music too, especially, baroque, and much more. Yes I'm, a Pisces, how did you guess. Here for you.Take good care. x

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/20/2020 11:37:00 AM

aww the world shouldn't be a loveless place..sometimes you just have to withdraw and recharge, i have days like this too..are you an aquarian by any chance?

Peter Dome
Date: 12/20/2020 12:19:00 PM

So true Charlotte. i have no one, makes it harder. sorry to hear you have days like this too. I'm a Pisces. Thank you. take good care, Here for you. Pete.x

Jenna Logan

Date: 12/20/2020 10:10:00 AM

“I’m thrown into the deep end of desperation.” That’s a fantastic line, Pete.

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/20/2020 10:48:00 AM

I’m a ok pete

Peter Dome
Date: 12/20/2020 10:18:00 AM

Hi Jenna. How are you. Thankyou so much. so glad you liked it. take care. Pete.