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March. 2. 2024
Sanctuary, Soft, Stir, Surreal Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
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Sanctuary

"If there is a place where peace and stillness prevail, to it people like to retreat when beset with the perils of life. It can be our home. In every storm it is a refuge, a haven of joy and a sanctuary of life and light" ~By Poet


We have a snug retreat far in the woods; An interim sanctuary, not bigger than a robin’s nest. But cozy and comfy for just two souls, A hideout from the fuss n’ fever of life. It has a small garden hemmed with a hedge, Neatly laid out in décor and taste And gleaming with refreshing verdure The haunt of butterflies and honey bees. An ideal place to sneak away now and then, From life’s pressing cares and concerns. Here the air is pristine sans soot and fumes. A confluence where peace and beauty unite. Here we break loose the tethers From the rigid civilities of urban living. Throw away the habits of reserve And become joyous and free-hearted. Sometimes we make an impromptu trip. Sometimes we plan it well in advance. Whatever it be, being here is fun And enjoy our stay like a weekend picnic. On some evenings we go gathering, Succulent fruits and wild berries And roam to the wide stretch of open fields Lying furrowed waiting for seasonal crops. More than ever we now seek solitude. It is in the quiet and not in the noise, That we can plumb life’s depths, That we listen to our hearts’ songs. It is here our souls acquire dove’s wings. Though time has taken its toll on our bodies, Though youth and beauty have gone forever, Still, we walk in the woods with hands clasped. In this sanctuary, we breathe free and find comfort Where sunshine scatters through the canopy of trees And are sheltered from the pressing responsibilities of life!
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Junaid Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 7:35 AM
these words felt liberating, like a breath of fresh air.
Farookh Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 11:12 AM
This is a lovely poem deserving of its place... "It is here our souls acquire dove’s wings. Though time has taken its toll on our bodies, Though youth and beauty have gone forever, Still, we walk in the woods with hands clasped." I loved these verses... Congratulations and blessings, Valsa.
Jones Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 2:55 PM
Your first place win is well deserved Valsa as you are a very skilled and versatile writer! Congratulations!
La France Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 11:23 AM
Valsa, a beautifully penned poem, I love the image and quote also, congratulations on your win in my contest, hugs, Constance
George Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 8:25 PM
Thank you so much for the high placement you have given to my poem... dear Constance. Love and hugs!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Sanctuary" write/ending. Love the picture. Our home is our "Sanctuary." Have a great day with your wonderful win..................
Guptar Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations Valsa on your top placement in this contest with a picturesque write on a sanctuary of the imagination, where you seek refuge from the hurly burly of the city.
Proxenos Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 12:38 PM
What a serene poem about the lives of you and your loving husband, how you finding peaxe and comfort in your small but cozy home and your walks in the fields as you clasp hands and your not being as young as you were, reminds me so much of my husband and I. I totally relate to your exquisite write as we are much the same. I love this poem and wish you both many more years of exactly as you are spending them my dear friend Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Greenhough Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 7:31 PM
Poem connects with me. Secret get away places give a person a rest from harried modern life.. I like the positive thoughts of this verse.
Poet Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 4:08 PM
Your poem effectively expresses a deep and sincere appreciation for the refuge that nature provides. It eloquently acknowledges the therapeutic qualities of serenity and the capacity to discover solace in the face of life's uncertainties. By employing vivid imagery and heartfelt introspection, your poem encourages readers to join you on a voyage that embraces the serenity and magnificence of the natural world. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest, dear Valsa.
One Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 7:52 AM
Your poem poem conveys a profound sense of gratitude for the sanctuary found in nature's embrace. It celebrates the restorative power of quietude and the ability to find comfort and solace amidst life's uncertainties. Through its evocative imagery and heartfelt reflections, the poem invites readers to journey alongside the narrator, embracing the tranquillity and beauty of the natural world... Best of luck in the contest dear..
McBride  Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Beautiful, we all need this, to ponder on life itself, love your captivating storytelling ways to bring unity, comfort, guidance and encouragement to the depth of souls. : )
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 5:11 AM
Ahhh!! The perfect get away. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us and for dropping by my page. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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