Samara

Samara...

Brilliant sunshine, silvery cloud;
looked down and found me lost in a crowd.
Some nights, I flew and followed the breeze.
Some nights, my world turned into a freeze.
Sometimes, I was lost, going my way;
it didn't matter night was or day.
I played with swallows, morning at dawn;
next day rested, rest on a velvet lawn.
One day, bathed in a droplet of dew,
next day in a storm, angry and blue.
Where am I going? Nobody knows!
Hope for a garden, a garden of rose.
Where is my unknown destination?
How come there is no affirmation?
Where do I find my liberation?
When I was made of limitation!
Living in a cage looks like my body,
shackled with chains, stained and cloudy.
Frustration, anger, what do I know?
How cold and which way does the wind blow?
One more day and then, loneliest night;
One more storm and then another fight.
I crashed into the solid unknown.
Hit the ground and dazed, cold like a stone.
Covered by darkness, into the ground,
deeper and deeper and round and round.
No more excuses, no more complain.
No more, no more living with the pain.
My days have passed, and my weeks have gone,
I was afraid of not seeing dawn.
Dying in a grave that's dark and cold;
nothing to worry, and nothing to hold.
Death is the friend that washes our pain. 
All of that darkness begins its reign.
Suddenly, I felt a throbbing pain.
A painful root that stretched like a cane.
Out of my body into the ground,
deeper and deeper whispering sound.
Pushing me upward, up and away,
little by little and all the way.
I started to see the sea of light;
orange and yellow, purple and white.
The sun was hugging, gentle, and warm. 
No more darkness or thundering storm.
Gentle breeze at night, night after night;
no more sadness and fearful of flight.
The wind played music day after day,
Eternal Spring is April and May.
Wherever I looked, life was too bright,
Spring and summer are gorgeous delight.
What happened? I died, died as a seed.
Then suddenly, I turned into a weed.
Everywhere I looked, heaven on Earth.
Thousands of flowers, ready to birth.
The whispering breeze was gentle and warm;
promised me there would be no more storm.
To live or to die, why should I try?
With love, we're flying until we die.
Summer is too good; summer is fine.
Which would you prefer, grapes or wine?
Little by little, summer was gone.
Trees turned yellow; autumn was on.
Autumn is yellow and colder at night,
sunset, and sunrise, always in a fight.
Colder and colder night after night,
shorter and dimmer brightness of light.
Autumn is always blooming sorrow. 
You borrow sorrow for tomorrow.
Winter is coming, angry and mad.
Freezing and chilling, piercing and sad.
Covered me with that drifted snow,
How long will it be? I do not know.
Dying is easy; living is hard.
What nature makes will later discard.
Once there was a seed hoping to bloom,
then he died and slept covered in gloom.
Then he woke up in a mountain of light,
filled with love and joy, absence of fright.
Then, there was the whole cycle of rhyme;
died again in the snow, waiting his time.
Like a seed, I know the cycle of life.
There will be some peace but lots of strife.
There will be blizzards in our upcoming;
no more fear of what is becoming.
No more fear of what is becoming;
Dying or living, both welcoming.
4/13/20


Note: This style of poetry is called "Masnavi", it is a spiritual story in the form of couplets. This particular Masnavi consists of nine syllables in each line. Poetrysoup has a great explanation and example of this form of poetry.
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Proxenos Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 10:41 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD An intriguing thought provoking write Pashang - living or dying is welcoming you write, you remind me of SHAKESPEARS - HAMLET, for to live or to die meant so little to him. Hope 2022 is an awesome year for you Pashang. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Duet Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 7:45 PM
What a lovely and unusual poem, Pashang! Very nice. Love the rhythm and rhyme.
Salehi Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 1:36 PM
Thank you, my dear Carole... I love to tell stories.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Hello Pashang Salehi, I have enjoyed this spiritual story poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
Salehi Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Thank you my dear Darlene... You are so nice.
Foli Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 4:43 PM
Long but very inspiring poem. There's a lot I need to learn from you. Keep them coming my dear friend. Love and hugs.
Salehi Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Size does not matter my dear friend... LOL... thank you.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 2:46 AM
Wow masnavi an eastern form and it reads very beautifully in muse epic style. You mention the seasons and thoughts superbly. Kudos and congrats on your POTD.
Salehi Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 3:04 PM
Thank you Zynab...
Manassian Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 6:20 AM
I lived the journey with you. There is hope...as the seasons pass...each with its own purpose and beauty. Beautiful masnavi. Blessings...
Wanter Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 6:44 PM
Many, many pretty lines in this. Contragulations.
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:24 PM
Thank you, Sunlite.
Michael Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 12:33 PM
Well expressed, not sure what is Masnavi...but it's true Freewrite... Congratulations Pashang on POTD
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:25 PM
Thank you, Mr. Michael.
Mishra Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 11:20 PM
Congratulations on POTD...a wonderful write...
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:25 PM
Thank you, Ashok.
Nicole Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 9:39 PM
"Dying or living, both welcoming" Oh my!! You certainly express this throughout the entire poem. Your thoughts wrap gently around me and my heart. This is beautiful, spiritual and tender- all at the same time. Congratulations Pashang, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:26 PM
Thank you, Brandy.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 8:54 PM
This is very beautiful Pashang. Congratulations on having this gem honored with POTD! xxoo
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:26 PM
Connie you're so nice.
Hawkens Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 4:24 PM
This is a Beautiful expression, my friend. Congratulations on POTD. JC Hawkens
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:27 PM
Thank you, JC.
La France Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Pashang, you have penned a beautiful poem in a very interesting form, congratulations on receiving POTD, enjoy the honor _Constance
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:27 PM
My dear Heart thanks a lot.
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 12:47 PM
- An impressive poem ... congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise.
Williams Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 8:16 AM
So well written, I was captivated from start to finish my friend. I really like this style of poetry, you certainly excel in these rare forms. You deserve the honour of POTD. Congratulations Pashang....Maria Hugs
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:29 PM
You are so wonderful my dear Maria.
May Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 7:17 AM
You captured the cycle of life well, Congrats on POTD..
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:29 PM
Thank you Joseph...
Pandit Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 7:15 AM
Back with congrats Pashang on poem of the day.
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:30 PM
Thank you, Vijay...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Definitely a work of Art to be highly appreciated and rated! Congratulations, Pashang, on your POTD honour! Well earned recognition! Looking forward to reading other unique gems of yours.. My deepest regards and blessings.
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:31 PM
Thank you Besma...
Warrior Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 4:08 AM
Great spiritual write my friend...you excel in this form...Congrats!! on POTD!! Pashang...stay safe...from the Wingster :o)
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:31 PM
You are too kind WW...
Cunningham Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 3:15 AM
Well written thought provoking verse Pashang, congrats on your POTD honours. Tom
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Thank you Tom...
Rodrigues Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Loved reading this new to me form! I can see this as a great spoken word!
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Thank you Kim...
Ball Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 1:51 PM
This is really great my friend. Here you describe the Spring, Summer and Winter of a living plant. Some plants put out new seeds and themselves die in winter but others merely sleep. The wake in the spring and also have new seeds coming up beside them. I see this in my garden all the time. We can relate this to human life a well. Well done. Bravo. God Bless, JB
Salehi Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Thank you Judy...
Gupta Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 11:13 AM
lines of beauty ... lines of life ...lines so mighty ... lines of strife ... enchanting write ...
Salehi Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 2:19 AM
Thank you, Probir my dear friend...
Manassian Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 8:51 AM
I lived the journey with you. There is hope...as the seasons pass...each with its own purpose and beauty. Beautiful masnavi. Blessings...
Salehi Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 2:19 AM
Thank you, Eileen my dear friend...say hello to Shireen for me.
Rose  Avatar
April 15, 2020 at 6:12 AM
This is so beautifully done dear poet. its been a while since I read your poetry. Its always a pleasure to drop in Be well and stay safe xo
Salehi Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 2:18 AM
Thank you, Pixie...
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