Salutations, Spring

We sing your praises long before you’re due
and after you’ve departed—all year long!
You bring green grass and flowers into view—
plus bugs, torrential rains, and winds so strong.

You come with warmth to woo the Earth to life.
Sweet fragrances come wafting on the breeze.
With allergens, the springtime air is rife.
My faucet-nostrils drip; I wheeze and sneeze.

But allergies and rashes can’t negate
your glory. Nor can pollen steal the praise
you’ve earned. Now I’ll just take my meds and wait
till I can relish your more winning ways.
	
     I’ve sneezed on this creation seven times.
     My dripping nose baptized the latter rhymes.


February 11, 2023
written for the Spring Is Not All Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner


February 11, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Slaughter Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 11:08 AM
If this doesn't do well in the contest, Janice, there is no poetic justice. BOL.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 6:03 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I love your great ending. Have a great/blessed day......................
Kiser Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 2:34 PM
I do that too, all spring and fall, but I still love springtime; well crafted write.
Canerdy Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Thanks so much, M. L. My bouts with allergies are brief, thank the Lord. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 12:18 PM
A fun write. I love the Spring time of the year. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away......................
Canerdy Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Thanks so much, Paula. Janice
Bauer Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 2:01 PM
very cleverly written, janice - especially the humorous ending!
Canerdy Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 3:07 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice
Pandit Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 9:15 AM
Some blots on beauty of spring--wonderfully delivered on contest theme, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 11:16 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
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