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Salutations, Spring

We sing your praises long before you’re due and after you’ve departed—all year long! You bring green grass and flowers into view— plus bugs, torrential rains, and winds so strong. You come with warmth to woo the Earth to life. Sweet fragrances come wafting on the breeze. With allergens, the springtime air is rife. My faucet-nostrils drip; I wheeze and sneeze. But allergies and rashes can’t negate your glory. Nor can pollen steal the praise you’ve earned. Now I’ll just take my meds and wait till I can relish your more winning ways. I’ve sneezed on this creation seven times. My dripping nose baptized the latter rhymes. February 11, 2023 written for the Spring Is Not All Poetry Contest Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner February 11, 2023

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Date: 3/15/2023 11:08:00 AM
If this doesn't do well in the contest, Janice, there is no poetic justice. BOL.
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Date: 3/3/2023 6:03:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I love your great ending. Have a great/blessed day......................
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Date: 2/12/2023 2:34:00 PM
I do that too, all spring and fall, but I still love springtime; well crafted write.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/13/2023 7:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, M. L. My bouts with allergies are brief, thank the Lord. Janice
Date: 2/12/2023 12:18:00 PM
A fun write. I love the Spring time of the year. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/13/2023 7:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paula. Janice
Date: 2/11/2023 4:19:00 PM
This is excellent Janice…made my eyes water a little, but still Great!!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2023 6:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Mark! Janice :-)
Date: 2/11/2023 2:01:00 PM
very cleverly written, janice - especially the humorous ending!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2023 3:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice
Date: 2/11/2023 9:15:00 AM
Some blots on beauty of spring--wonderfully delivered on contest theme, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2023 11:16:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice

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