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Salty Words

The Ghost and Mrs. Muir, one of my favorite films, hauntingly irresistible in black and white. The sun neither rises nor sets as the words stir in the tide. Like fabric, I touch and feel the throng of poetry, and roll the plenipotentiary words between my palms like playdough.
full-throttle captain he ponders and tugs his beard — ethereal sea Mrs. Muir welcomes his salty words of times past — this ghost is her muse
The grit on my fingers, its mineral on my tongue, its scent of salty fish I inhale, as I tap on a cordless typewriter, my billowing blouse compliments the snow-white window treatment flapping in the windswept seaside cottage - but a dream.
the sand beneath feet bare and entertained, tickled by my inward muse 8/1/2019

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Date: 8/1/2019 3:24:00 PM
I haven't seen "The Ghost", but your images are so, hm, voluminous? spacy? (I donno how to say it in English) that I think I saw it, or rather, I saw your impression of it through your eyes. This is a very special feeling that comes quite rarely. A very, hm, spacy haibun)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2019 5:13:00 PM
Thanks, Kurt! :)
Date: 8/1/2019 9:49:00 AM
I love how you put this together. so clever and well penned!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanne! Hugs
Date: 8/1/2019 8:07:00 AM
This is a brilliant piece Kim, and it is going into my Faves! Your poetic talent really shines in this gem! : ) xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank so much, Connie! :):)
Date: 8/1/2019 7:28:00 AM
Absolutely ethereal writing dearest, Kim. Enjoyed it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Date: 8/1/2019 7:14:00 AM
... I enjoy the smell of the sea ... outside this cabin you describe ... a wonderful poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2019 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

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