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Salt In My Wound

I’m dining at a small café alone—that’s nothing new-- when suddenly THEY sashay by and blind me with the view! Just look at that huge shiny sight, a devastating thing! Nothing could have readied me for seeing her fine ring. While looking at my own left hand, I think of when I wore a diamond solitaire much like the one she now adores. What hurts the most is knowing that the man engaged to me six months ago is the same one that, through my tears, I see embracing her. I hear him say, “We’ll never be apart.” He gave to her one precious stone, a bullet to my heart. Then, rubbing salt into my wound, as she walked by, she said, “Oh, have you seen my ring, Nadine?” She smirked as my heart bled. entered in Line Gauthier's Another 2017 Stunner Contest, April 2018 placed 2nd July 20, 2018, entered in Kai Michael Newmann's A Moment in Time Contest June 15, 2020, entered in Anthony Biaanco's Crushed Poetry Contest September 21, 2020 entered in Brian Strand's Completely Your Choice (14) Poetry Contest February 24, 2021 entered in the Salt Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 4/20/2018 4:39:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/20/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise! Janice
Date: 4/19/2018 9:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of heartbreak, well written. Enjoyed reading.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/19/2018 9:58:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan! Janice
Date: 4/19/2018 4:37:00 PM
Thanks, Janice, for entering my contest with this most endearing poem and earning a silver medal win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/19/2018 5:15:00 PM
Line, thank you so much for sponsoring the contest and for my trophy win! Janice
Date: 11/14/2017 11:44:00 AM
Brilliant poetic expression of jilted pain, Janice. I love this poem, and I really love the title. Excellent poem, dear. Love and joy always.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/14/2017 4:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Freddie! Janice
Date: 11/8/2017 8:20:00 PM
Upsetting write, Janice, but excellent. Luck in the contest hugs Eve
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/8/2017 9:00:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! Janice
Date: 11/8/2017 7:02:00 PM
Excellent--You picked the right theme, Janice--I was wondering why no one was writing about the precious stone--your turn towards the end was a surprise!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/8/2017 9:04:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! I pondered the theme for quite a while before settling on this one. Janice
Date: 11/8/2017 5:30:00 PM
WOW, amazingly done, Janice. I love how you interpreted that theme. I think I am not gonna win with my simple poem!!! If John does not love this one. OH MY
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/8/2017 9:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. This comment is very encouraging. Janice

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