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Salt Fields

Are we lost my friend? Here is my muse. My trance. That I created As I walked your salt fields last night. The breeze, A beast of burden Came to rest in my arms. The sea never felt so at home. For they said, Every word I spoke Took shape Like living things, Casting moving shadows, Dancing to a rhythm Lost. In the abyss of my soul, My being. And with every step I took, Did I grow younger! And the lead I have been given for blood I felt it move. And though it could hardly be more real, It was as if my feet wouldn't touch the ground. Nevermind, I left traces.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/21/2016 11:43:00 AM
- Wonderful written, Nikita :) - Continue to write, you are skilled - hugs from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/20/2016 11:54:00 PM
datta, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 7:21:00 PM
NIKITA :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 7/30/2015 9:50:00 AM
it's amazing how our thoughts come together....muses stem from candle lit dinners to stormy weather....whatever the muse, just let it inspire....the pen is a weapon so let it fire.....great write....;)
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