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Awoke with a feeling of deflation The razzamatazz is over pressie’s given Then a thought arouses me with a smile Whilst the men watch the sport on this boxing day A few cans in reach We females can hit the sales with parking queues for a mile Like a rugby match the people snatch and run So much on offer, it’s all in the fun You don’t try it you buy it cos it’s less than half price A bargain is a bargain , wouldn’t usually look twice You go home laden with things you know you’ll return Was a bargain yet not quite what you yearn Wearily you slip off your shoes with a big yawn Food’s in the kitchen, help yourself, this maid is tooo worn Been a wonderful day, so different from Christmas Yet they both need each other to emphasise the past

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Date: 1/21/2017 6:25:00 AM
Hey sweetie, I miss you. A Fav! Lots Of Love, armand.
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Date: 12/21/2016 7:04:00 PM
Oh such a funny poem - I try and avoid the sales - they bring in stuff to shift no one else wants lol. I have almost finished my poem for the contest - its a great theme lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/22/2016 7:52:00 PM
hi Jan thanks for stopping by. lol more things go back than is bought.......seren
Date: 12/21/2016 8:28:00 AM
Can you pick me up a few items?... Terrific poem Seren.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/21/2016 6:59:00 PM
Nah i need you to be my bodyguard.......Seren
Date: 12/21/2016 8:01:00 AM
It is a good time to catch a bargain, Seren. A fun poem to read. Merry Christmas:)
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Date: 12/21/2016 7:01:00 PM
Thanks Daniel things you buy are not always the bargain you expected..... but shouldnt be missed...Seren