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"And in my dream, I love the vastness of the ocean, the crisp wind, the azure sky above and the freedom of sailing true north."

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I cast off the line of my small sailboat leaving all my cares on the dock: In the beginning I heave, pitch and rock, as I set my compass for true north; swaying back and forth ! Now, in turquoise water and azure sky- I float and with a crisp wind at my back; my sails unfurl with a loud crack ! A curious whale does not attack and I sail a northern track: Oh, it takes courage to lose the shore with only pitching waves that roar ! I am gliding, flying- leaning to the side, while happy dolphins swim alongside; the earth's magnetic force pulling me, and I have never felt so wonderfully free ! Then, suddenly the wind is calm and gentle, transcendental- and from this dream . . . I am still afloat; not lost- but in a place beautifully remote. __________________ July 24, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/Sailing True North Copyright Protected, ID 07-1475-651-24 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Sailing sponsor, Julia Ward, Judged 08/09/2022 Second Place

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Date: 8/9/2022 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations for your win. Very nice :)
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Date: 8/10/2022 3:30:00 PM
Heidi, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 8/9/2022 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!  What a wonderful~write/story/picture. Most kids want a cat/dog as a pet, I wanted 2 dolphins to swim with. Guess you know that never happened. Oh well!!! Have a fun/great/blessed day with this wonderful win.......................
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Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2022 3:31:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 8/9/2022 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your "Sailing True north" win. An enjoyable read Constance. Cheers Anne :-)
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Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2022 3:32:00 PM
Anne, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 8/9/2022 9:56:00 AM
A very enchanting scene is created where "happy dolphins swim alongside" - Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2022 3:32:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations , blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/26/2022 12:20:00 PM
Poem and picture, perfect match ... I enjoy the excitement and then the perfect peace of your poem, Constance. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill
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Constance La France
Date: 7/26/2022 3:57:00 PM
Bill, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, appreciate, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/24/2022 6:52:00 PM
Good title! Aloha!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/25/2022 1:52:00 PM
Rico, thank you for the compliment, now to write the poem !! blessings ~Constance

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