Sailing To Us

"sailing to us"

sailing to us is the world
we see its beauty
we hear its glory
such spices we taste
such love we feel
forever these caresses touch

with mountains high...
with oceans deep...

we reach for the stars
we believe in "possible"
each moment is savored
each whisper is received
eternally finding life
sailing to us is us


SkyWatcher  -  05-29-17
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Makama Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.
Ricci Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Good Morning Funom. Hello. Once again I am so very sorry for this late response. May all know of love and have love. Enjoy the day and poetry as well. I will see you on your page.
Lindley Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Words that sail with charm and pleasure as read. You have crafted a beautiful piece my friend. With inspiration and truth thy pen does so shine! A fav....
Ricci Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 5:00 AM
Good Morning Robert. I hope this day finds you well. Thank you very much for such generosity. Honestly. May all know of love. Have a wonderful day. I will see you on your page.
Michaels Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 4:14 AM
So much scope captured within such a short piece... beautiful! Well done, Lisa - another great write from the master of Free Verse! Regards, John.
Ricci Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 4:15 AM
Oh My Goodness. Good Morning John. Can I bottle up and save this review. I am so honored by your words and commentary to which is most generous. Please know I enjoy and respect your work also. Also know I do not take reviews or commentary lightly. Have a wonderful morning and day. I will see you on your page. Many thank yous again for such generosity. Honestly. I hope my work and I are deserving.
Wolf Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 3:54 AM
That last line really clenches the deal on this lovely entry, Lisa! A pleasure reading you tonight! Enjoy your day!
Ricci Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 4:12 AM
Good Evening White Wolf. I'm very sorry for such a late response to such a wonderful and generous review. May this night find you well. May all know of love. I will see you on your page.
Coreggia Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 7:56 AM
This is an enchanting piece that makes us feel part of an all encompassing moment that is alive in both giving and receiving :) Amitiés
Ricci Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 4:25 PM
Good Evening Miss Anne-Marie. What a beautiful and yes enchanting review by you. Thank you for gracing this entry. Where would we be without love. I do not take your generosity for granted. Have a wonderful night. Amities back to you. I will see you on your page.
Williams Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 1:37 AM
Lovely descriptive words Lisa, I can so imagine you and your loved one reaching for the stars and it makes me happy...... Maria
Ricci Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 1:37 PM
You are priceless. Hi Maria. Top of the Afternoon to you. Thank you as always. Never do I take your visits and reviews lightly. I'm pleased you liked this entry. Love is for all. Have a wonderful night. I'm on slow mode these days but I will see you soon on your page. Thank you again Maria.
Ella Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 10:37 PM
So refreshing! The photo and your words <3 It is love in the beginnings and so full of possibilities :) Very nice!
Ricci Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 1:34 PM
Hello Miss Sara. I hope this day finds you well. I'm sorry for this late response. Thank you so very much for your generosity and for your marvelous intake. I love it. I like the thought and concept of the beginning stages. How grand is that. Very. Have a wonderful night. Stay well.
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 4:37 PM
what a charming poem and picture - I get a sense of a sailing away on honeymoon on a voyage to distant lands:-) hugs Jan xx
Ricci Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 1:33 PM
Hello Jan. I'm sorry for this late response. Thank you very much as always for your generosity. Honestly. I love your intake and version by the way. How grand is that. Very. Have a wonderful night. I will see you soon on your page.
White Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 1:46 PM
That is you, with your hat :) I can see it. Sailing it is, always sailing. We have this beautiful ship, that sometimes has these webbed wings. It carries us everywhere we want to go, and everything is possible.
Ricci Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 2:11 PM
He He He. Thank you Darren. Of course I had to have my hat with me (lol). Everything is possible. It has to be. I hope you enjoyed the entry. Always do I appreciate your intakes. Honestly. Have a wonderful night. I will see you on your page.
Green Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 12:11 PM
As long as you sail to each other, I would expect only calm seas ahead. Your love poetry is always so beautiful and genuine feeling my friend. Setting sail for another's heart where you know a safe harbor is waiting. So very enchanting.
Ricci Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 12:35 PM
Hello Chris. Oh my goodness. Thank you so much. Honestly. And yes, enchanting is your intake and review. Never is it taken lightly. I will be returning back to you later on. I know I know I have no idea what my problem is... (lol) I'm still on slow mode. Have a wonderful afternoon. PS: You bet calm seas ahead.
Smith Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Very lovely Lisa it flows so well and that pic brings me a smile.
Ricci Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Hello Tim. Thank you very much. Never do I take your generosity for granted. I'm pleased you liked the image as well. I was just about to make way back to your page once again. I'm still on slow mode these days.... Have a wonderful afternoon.
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