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Sailing Life

Sailing self being in the ocean of life For the unknown destiny to win over strife Paddling steadily with the music of time that's buzzing in my ears as crickets chime Sometimes rude thunder screams at me after then blue sky smiles with glee Sometimes hot Sun shines beam with light again flooding water falls me in plight Seal Octopus they attack with their jaws suddenly Angel helps me as Santa Claus A mystery hiding in me I feel when I stare whatever the Life may be I must take care

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Date: 4/6/2021 1:07:00 PM
That's life, BL. Ups & downs, good a& bad...we have to learn to cope with each and every situation. Best regards // paul
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/21/2021 11:52:00 AM
Thanks my dear friend for stopping by. Loved always, bl
Date: 3/19/2021 6:29:00 PM
Interesting write. ;0)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/6/2021 1:01:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend
Date: 3/15/2021 3:25:00 PM
Enjoyable read with fine rhyming.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/6/2021 1:01:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend
Date: 8/5/2020 10:34:00 AM
hello Bl. Devnathe, yes what ever life throws at us, we must take care. enjoy your day my friend.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/6/2021 1:02:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend
Date: 10/27/2019 3:08:00 PM
Love the emotion and imagery of the ups and downs you've made life be. Enjoyed reading BL.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/6/2021 1:02:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend
Date: 10/27/2019 1:17:00 PM
- Great poetically written, Bl ... life can give surprises ... always be careful, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 10/27/2019 1:58:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend for your appreciation. Loved always, bl
Date: 10/27/2019 5:52:00 AM
On the journey of life many adventures await us. :) You chronicled these well, dear.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 10/27/2019 10:26:00 AM
Thanks my dear friend for your uplifting comment. Loved always, bl

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