Al Juman Poet Free verse

Said the Shadow

Said the shadow
I am always crawling behind you.
look carefully!
I am a ghost!
I am yours!
no! I am his, hers, theirs.
Did I scare you?
No ---oo!
I just pull the pee out of you.

11/2/2015                     © Al. Juman - The said Poet
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Paul Callus August 23, 2018 at 1:32 PM This is light free verse with a smile, Al :) Every time I notice my shadow following me I make a quick 180 degree turn and catch him in the act:) // paul

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton August 21, 2018 at 2:58 PM Boo! Al Juman August 25, 2018 at 11:00 AM Sure my dear.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri August 11, 2018 at 5:16 AM A great witty poem on shadows. You write so nicely. Kudos. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too. Al Juman August 11, 2018 at 8:22 PM thanks my friend --I do appreciate that

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 7, 2018 at 12:57 PM Giggles ;) xomo! Al Juman August 11, 2018 at 7:55 PM Thanks my friend--I do appreciate that

Charlie Smith July 12, 2018 at 9:52 AM You just can't shake it, so to speak. Good one Al... Al Juman July 31, 2018 at 9:52 PM Thank you my friend do appreciate that

Pandita Sietesantos July 11, 2018 at 1:32 PM Hahahaha - my own shadow has startled me before - felt like my heart skipped a beat:-)! I enjoyed this read! Thanks, Al! Hugs and best regards. Pandita Al Juman July 11, 2018 at 10:22 PM Thank you sweetheart

Pashang Salehi July 9, 2018 at 7:22 PM Interesting concept... I have something about shadow, is called "my shadow " it is in a form of Masnavi... you might like it...I posted on 6.24.2016... Al Juman July 9, 2018 at 10:29 PM thank you my friend

Phyllis Babcock July 6, 2018 at 5:14 PM Only your shadow knows ha ha made me chuckle. love phyl Al Juman July 8, 2018 at 11:15 AM Thank you my dear appreciate that

Darlene De Beaulieu July 4, 2018 at 11:33 AM Hello Al Juman your poem made me smile. I have never thought of a shadow as a ghost. Have a nice day my friend. Al Juman July 4, 2018 at 12:29 PM THanks for your words

Laura Leiser July 4, 2018 at 11:27 AM Witty and funny! Great poem, Al! Al Juman July 8, 2018 at 11:15 AM Thank you my dear I do appreciate that

Faraz Ajmal July 4, 2018 at 8:42 AM Oops it is always behind me, now I wonder that what things he must have seen and I should definitely try to negotiate with him coz he knows all of my secrets, lol, it sure was a really nice poem and an enjoyable one to read,good luck and have a really nice day Al Juman July 9, 2018 at 2:08 PM Thank you my friend

Janice Canerdy July 3, 2018 at 5:37 PM Well done, Al! Janice Al Juman July 9, 2018 at 2:07 PM Thank you my dear

Joseph May July 3, 2018 at 1:58 PM The shadow knows ..lol..Nicely penned Al Al Juman July 3, 2018 at 3:00 PM thank you my friend

Mystic Rose Rose July 3, 2018 at 11:47 AM lol Al Juman July 3, 2018 at 2:55 PM appreciate that

Lyric Man July 2, 2018 at 11:54 PM Al.. a super write my friend! Al Juman July 3, 2018 at 2:55 PM Thank you my friend