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Said the Shadow

Said the shadow I am always crawling behind you. look carefully! I am a ghost! I am yours! no! I am his, hers, theirs. Did I scare you? No ---oo! I just pull the pee out of you. 11/2/2015 © Al. Juman - The said Poet Type In (Al. Juman) For A relaxing and astonishing moment with all my POEMS

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/23/2018 1:32:00 PM

This is light free verse with a smile, Al :) Every time I notice my shadow following me I make a quick 180 degree turn and catch him in the act:) // paul

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 8/21/2018 2:58:00 PM

Boo!

Al Juman
Date: 8/25/2018 11:00:00 AM

Sure my dear.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/11/2018 5:16:00 AM

A great witty poem on shadows. You write so nicely. Kudos. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too.

Al Juman
Date: 8/11/2018 8:22:00 PM

thanks my friend --I do appreciate that

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/7/2018 12:57:00 PM

Giggles ;) xomo!

Al Juman
Date: 8/11/2018 7:55:00 PM

Thanks my friend--I do appreciate that

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/12/2018 9:52:00 AM

You just can't shake it, so to speak. Good one Al...

Al Juman
Date: 7/31/2018 9:52:00 PM

Thank you my friend do appreciate that

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/11/2018 1:32:00 PM

Hahahaha - my own shadow has startled me before - felt like my heart skipped a beat:-)! I enjoyed this read! Thanks, Al! Hugs and best regards. Pandita

Al Juman
Date: 7/11/2018 10:22:00 PM

Thank you sweetheart

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/9/2018 7:22:00 PM

Interesting concept... I have something about shadow, is called "my shadow " it is in a form of Masnavi... you might like it...I posted on 6.24.2016...

Al Juman
Date: 7/9/2018 10:29:00 PM

thank you my friend

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/6/2018 5:14:00 PM

Only your shadow knows ha ha made me chuckle. love phyl

Al Juman
Date: 7/8/2018 11:15:00 AM

Thank you my dear appreciate that

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/4/2018 11:33:00 AM

Hello Al Juman your poem made me smile. I have never thought of a shadow as a ghost. Have a nice day my friend.

Al Juman
Date: 7/4/2018 12:29:00 PM

THanks for your words

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/4/2018 11:27:00 AM

Witty and funny! Great poem, Al!

Al Juman
Date: 7/8/2018 11:15:00 AM

Thank you my dear I do appreciate that

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/4/2018 8:42:00 AM

Oops it is always behind me, now I wonder that what things he must have seen and I should definitely try to negotiate with him coz he knows all of my secrets, lol, it sure was a really nice poem and an enjoyable one to read,good luck and have a really nice day

Al Juman
Date: 7/9/2018 2:08:00 PM

Thank you my friend

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/3/2018 5:37:00 PM

Well done, Al! Janice

Al Juman
Date: 7/9/2018 2:07:00 PM

Thank you my dear