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Said My Poetic Intent

Said my intent.
I do not discriminate
by race, 
by sex 
or
by religion.
I merely write historic insightful facts,
depict of the human minds' moral 
and ethical behaviors.
Should I offend!
I pray God forgiveness.
© Al Juman  The "said" Poet 7/7/2018

Copyright © Al Juman | Year Posted 2018

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August 23, 2018 at 8:26 PM

G'day Al … I thought poetry was created from the artistic minds that some can write down, where others struggle. There is need for looking down the nose at others. We all end up the same way - thank you Al for your insight - Lindsay

August 25, 2018 at 10:56 AM

Thanks Lindsay---Appreciate you

August 9, 2018 at 1:22 PM

Wonderful write. It rings of truth. Enjoyed immensely.

August 11, 2018 at 4:57 PM

Thank you Frank --much obliged

August 8, 2018 at 3:35 PM

You would only offend those who do discriminate. Best, Beverly

August 11, 2018 at 4:56 PM

Thank you Bev --so sweet of you

Pandita Sietesantos

August 1, 2018 at 4:33 PM

Al, I loved reading these words that came from your heart. It would be wonderful if more people would share these moral and ethical beliefs! Your thoughts expressed are the thoughts of a great human being! Love and hugs. Pandita

August 20, 2018 at 11:44 PM

Thanks a million Pandita

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

July 31, 2018 at 1:36 AM

Poetic freedom ! Nicely put.

July 31, 2018 at 9:36 PM

Much obliged my friend-- thanks again

July 12, 2018 at 1:31 PM

"There is no love without forgiveness, and there is no forgiveness without love".

July 30, 2018 at 9:51 PM

Much obliged my friend-- thanks again

July 12, 2018 at 10:46 AM

a most honest , humble expression of your inner thoughts, al... grateful for your comment on my page... huggs

July 29, 2018 at 10:04 AM

thank you my dear----appreciate that

July 11, 2018 at 4:09 PM

Have anice day; shalom, shalom and salaam (Shanthi OM). These "s" words do sound like calmness, peace

July 11, 2018 at 9:45 PM

appreciate that my friend

July 11, 2018 at 3:53 PM

Wonderful poetry, so sincere.

July 11, 2018 at 9:45 PM

appreciate that my friend

July 10, 2018 at 9:51 AM

Pretty much all about love and forgiveness no matter the banner. Well done Al...

July 11, 2018 at 9:46 PM

appreciate that my friend

July 9, 2018 at 8:55 PM

Actually me also. I don't believe in any religion but humanity.

July 9, 2018 at 10:07 PM

WELL I believe in the good of all religion. I believe they did not just occur. Some one initiated their principals Love you my dear

Pandita Sietesantos

July 9, 2018 at 3:05 PM

This awesome declaration says a lot about the high caliber person you are and is a reflection of the wonderful human being that you are, my friend! We need more people like you! A powerful message indeed! Best regards and hugs. Pandita

July 8, 2018 at 3:49 PM

Your intentions are right and honorable, Al! I doubt if you have many occasions where you feel the need to ask for forgiveness! Regards // paul

July 9, 2018 at 12:46 PM

Thanks Paul I try my best to bring the best of me

July 8, 2018 at 3:44 PM

Thoughtful, well-said, Al. Janice

July 9, 2018 at 12:45 PM

Thanks janice

Mystic Rose Rose

July 8, 2018 at 1:26 PM

We should always ask God for forgiveness, we are human after all. Nice one

July 9, 2018 at 12:45 PM

Appreciate your kind words my dear

July 8, 2018 at 12:52 PM

Hi Al Juman, I really like the message you are trying to spread via your poem, yeah we all sre brothers, we all have come from the same origin, so we must love each other, learn to be tolerate and solely judge someone based on their attitude and character, not on their religion, colour, race or wealth, good luck

July 9, 2018 at 12:41 PM

You feel me well my friend. that is my purpose

July 7, 2018 at 10:21 PM

Hi Al.. We live in a crazy, sometimes scary, world of reality. But here on this page is another world.. one of wonder, creativity, adventure, and imagination. Stoping in and checking out your skillful write is the highlight of my day!

July 9, 2018 at 12:42 PM

I appreciate you my friend it is indeed incouraging

July 8, 2018 at 6:59 AM

L-M, what a poetic, loving, encouraging comment: let Thy Light shine even if we begin on Poetry Soup. Bible: "Do not despise these small beginnings" (Zechariah 4:10). Apology Al Juman: I was so happy to see this ocmment, I butted in. Shalom-Salaam

July 7, 2018 at 7:31 PM

no offence, Sir. Thanks for sharing IDEALS ... someone has to keep the light on. Thanks and salaam, shalom-shalom

July 7, 2018 at 9:19 PM

ANIL thank you my friend

July 7, 2018 at 2:48 PM

If only the rest of humanity would rise to this level of compassion. Great personification, Al. Sincerely, Elaine

July 7, 2018 at 9:18 PM

Elaine thank you my dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 7, 2018 at 2:11 PM

What God takes into consideration is not what we write but what our intentions are when we write! Do not worry then my friend for if your intentions are pure you do not need God's forgiveness for He has nothing to forgive you for!

July 7, 2018 at 9:18 PM

Demitros! Thank you my friend

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