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Safety Zone

On tenterhooks, our emotions run raw, our days are filled with silent fright. Feeling defeat sharpen it's claws, we spend many sleepless nights. We lay awake, with eyes shut tight, self isolated and alone. Our own demons, we cannot fight. We stay within our safety zone. Uselessness, we feel is our major flaw. For us there is no White Knight, to come and champion our cause. To us the sun, does not shine bright. There are only shadows in the light. We feel it to our very bones, there is no way out, from our plight. We stay within our safety zones. We find no help in Health Care Laws, the sharks circle, waiting to bite. We've run out of strength from which to draw, so we stand ready, to take flight. To hide within, out of sight. By life, we've been disowned, there is just grey, no colors, black or white.. We stay within our safety zone. There is no magic pill, that works, overnight. There is no happiness to call our own. Until this depression, we extradite, we stay within our safety zone. For the contest: Ballade Boomba Placement: 10th

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Date: 3/13/2011 7:53:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. This was not an easy contest, but your entry was very impressive.
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Date: 3/13/2011 2:15:00 PM
ahhh now if it WERE only safe? in the safety zone, but we know it's not, so, why not go try outside the box?Excellent write congrad's on your win in this hard form! Light & Love
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:44:00 PM
a unique slant with such gracious yet biting message, paula.. bid cheers for you desreved win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/10/2011 4:45:00 PM
A wonderful write. Congratulations on your win with this lovely Ballade. Caryl
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Date: 3/10/2011 2:33:00 PM
Lovely flow of thoughts on safety zone with apt imagery, paula. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/10/2011 2:28:00 PM
wow, Paula, this could describe so many desperate souls in society today. What a great way to take this form and deal with a relevent issue. Much deserving of a top ten win. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:31:00 AM
Magnificent writing Paula. I enjoyed very much. Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:00:00 AM
We certainly do try to remain within our safety zone when we are afraid, Paula. The metaphor of the health care reform act and the sharks is brilliant. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:42:00 AM
Wonderful Ballade, Paula. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on a well done winning poem. (I hope it is not from personal experience) Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:19:00 AM
Congrats Paula on your big win in Catie's contest with this superb Ballade entry my friend.. enjoy with luv...
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:08:00 PM
Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this. Sevenn. Looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn
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Date: 3/5/2011 8:43:00 PM
I can relate to the emotional pull of this writing..I too need a safety zone at times...Love,Deb
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